Reviews for A Demon Lord's Hero |
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K. M. Donovan chapter 2 . 8/4/2024 typically the single pawn issue is due to power balance/ in many of the naruto fics where he is reincarnated as a devil, he is somehow weakened by his journey to DXD, thus lowering his resurrection cost. add onto this, that he often no longer is a jinchuriki in those moments, but a full human? his "Price" is lowered significantly. as to why a pawn? it actually has less to do with cost, and more to do with versatility. as Pawns have access to Promotion. and can become ANY other piece. depending on the situation, this can be a MASSIVE game changer. Issei proves this in canon, even developing skills built around the promotion system to give him a virtual catalogue of skills and attacks to suit almost any opponent. it was only in the last couple of years that Issei finally Promoted to Queen in battle. and his new battle form is actually pretty freaking awesome. Pawns have a flexibility to them in the DXD universe that allows them to become almost anything the author can imagine. THAT is why it is such a popular resurrection method. plus, many of the characters are the types who like to build their own personal power through training. so while pawn gives them options, it does not actually give them much in the way of a personal power boost. thus the characters can have a personal story arc built around them getting stronger, both as a fighter, and as a character. |
lackofmolesfa chapter 6 . 7/30/2024 bro 2 girls 1 cup reference (got me laughing out loud in the public) |
DragonTetho chapter 26 . 6/27/2024 Let's gooo! No matter what, Seibah(Altria) will always be the only woman in Sword-Boi heart(except for Sakura and Rin) |
DragonTetho chapter 15 . 6/27/2024 Nah, now that I think about it Altria would probably kick Merlin out of his Tower and have him transport her to Shirou if she ever felt it or see this. |
Guest chapter 26 . 5/24/2024 I just want say I love this story and wish you could update but life can be a bitch so interstate and hope you are doing well |
Snig1815 chapter 1 . 5/14/2024 Welp; happy 4 years anniversary since last update!; (i'm still waiting for it btw) |
ryuschnitzel chapter 15 . 4/28/2024 Welp. Im dropping. As good as it is, there's also a lot of flaws and unnecesarry info dumps/word padding. The battle with Azazel was disappointing. Long and boring descriptions, a single action has 3 paragraph of words, useless POV filler, the pace of the fight is slow, the Fallens were weak, slash n hack and throw their light spears, some greek formation that took more paragraphs to introduce its origin, and a lot of unnecesarry explanations DURING a fight. For all that Azazel said that he won't hold back in his final fight, all he did was create a lot of light spears, shoot it at Shirou, and hack n slash Shirou's blades. No Grand magic spells, techniques or trump cards. Then we have this new antagonist that we know nothing about and does not belong in DxD universe, Sekerei's Karasuba. Who is this mysterious, edgy girl and why is everyone panicking. Whatever. It's not worth it and I've lost interest. You're still a good writer to come up with interesting ideals and background of each character. |
ryuschnitzel chapter 9 . 4/28/2024 Dear Author, you are truly a gifted man to write such thought provoking story. The philosophy and belief of both sides, not mention Asia's, is truly a captivating work. Or. Holy shite you are an amazing writer. I'm giddy to watch the curbstomp lmaoo |
Guest chapter 26 . 4/22/2024 This was pretty good. Not number one of all Fate crossover stories good. But definitely top fifty. And it is unfortunately also dropped like ninety percent of those top fifty. And right when things were starting too get complicated. Partially because of (even more drastic) canon divergences and partially because of different sources of complexity. |
Luxo11 chapter 9 . 4/22/2024 The power scaling is all over the place im glad you didnt finisb this |
Locothehood chapter 26 . 4/17/2024 Darn it ran out |
lucivar2010 chapter 26 . 4/14/2024 updated this masterpiece pleases |
Geokit chapter 2 . 3/18/2024 Aerle on Webnovel has stolen this work and posted onto webnovel as thier own without credit to the author who made this. stealing it basically word for word. i didnt read more then the frist and a bit of the 2nd chapter but it was taken word for word. it wants me to submit information that I own this story just to be able to report Aerle for plagiarism on Webnovel. |
Snig1815 chapter 12 . 3/16/2024 Day 50 of rereading (4th time) this masterpiece and waiting for an update. |
Between Calm and Storm chapter 10 . 3/9/2024 I had to stop and write a review before I finished this fic and have to say that it is great. The talks about ideals, and how Heaven has lost its way, to the simplicity of what makes a hero. Its sad that there is only 26 chapters, but I will be sure to enjoy whats left. Thanks for writing this. |