|Reviews for Gold in the End|
| haleywilson499 chapter 23 . 8/28
Love it can't wait for more
| MotherHenAMC chapter 23 . 8/12
I absolutely love your story! It is amazing and I cannot wait for the next part!
| kouga's older woman chapter 23 . 8/4
| Crotia chapter 23 . 8/4
Hey, I really love your story. I'm hoping for some Carlisle action too. I also like her attitude. i just love it all the way
| Picabo chapter 23 . 7/31
| Ladydeath1500 chapter 23 . 7/30
I love it hope to see more soon
| jeoliverio chapter 23 . 7/28
It's good that Bella stuck up for herself
| slyangelm02 chapter 23 . 7/27
Can't wait to see where this goes!
| jessa76 chapter 23 . 7/27
I just hope that emmett gets real couple time not Im gonna play board games and jasper and Eddie are the ones that love and cuddle with you. What is wrong with a hott smexy muscled man with dimples? Why don't all need a brooding redhead or emo control freak cowboys nothing wrong with hott football player type looking guys
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/24
I looooove it!
Thank you so much for writing
This is one of my favorties stories
I just love their relationship, how they can evolve and how in love they are but still manteining themselves
| LlovableLlamas chapter 1 . 7/24
So glad to read more. Enjoy reading about their developing relationships and understanding of each other.
| Annabanana94 chapter 23 . 7/24
I really like this story but it it is kind of disappointing to see that after 23 chapters they are still concerned about things that should have been solved a long time ago and that they don't seem to move forwards (much more taking into account that the story is not updated frequently)... At this point, in any kind of relationship, there should (at least) be sexual tension... and the only thing we get is a bunch of controlling assholes who treat Bella as a child... Hopefully, things will start to change from now on... But I don't see how a conversation could change someone's antics or how this could move to a more "mature" relationship...
I don't know why but I kind of prefer other stories of yours... they are similar in some things but because they haven't moved as far as this one, it seems like things are going at a right pace... At least in the story "the breaking of a vampire hunter" it is believable that they would not have gone towards a physical relationship because Bella still doesn't accept her life but in this story, there is no excuse...
And don't get me wrong, this is not about sex, but it seems like things should start to move forward at some point...
| lsvllchc chapter 23 . 7/24
Great update! Thank you
| TheAngelthatfellfromHeaven chapter 23 . 7/24
i love it! thank you for the update! i would love to see her get into trouble and them to have to punnish her, amazing story!
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/23
Can u please write moree this story is good