Reviews for Wide Skies (Stage One)
Guest chapter 10 . 10/26
Ahh~ We never even got to the "three kids became two teens" part of the summary. There were a few errors here and there, but it's tolerable( I've seen a lot worse). The story itself is really good, and I like reading about the kids' interactions and the others' POV. I'm hoping [the muse is still there and] the author gets back to this in the (very) near future.
Niknok19 chapter 10 . 2/29/2016
a story very interesting.
update soon please
roxsandf chapter 10 . 2/6/2016
omg this is amazing, i love this story, i cant wait for more, thank you for your work
RyuuenXKai chapter 9 . 2/2/2016
O.O did he just say Gai-sensei?! NOOOOOO! DONT TURN INTO A SECOND LEE! And what is this? I thought I was reading a KHR fanfic? Not Naruto. 0-0
joyce chapter 10 . 10/13/2015
great story, good writhing styl
please update the next chapter soon
jgood27 chapter 10 . 9/29/2015
Love this story and can't wait to read more
GreenDrkness chapter 10 . 9/18/2015
I love this story and all the little tics that each triplet has that supports the other two thirds of the triplets and with the summary I can't help but think which triplet is either missing in action or dead
I love the concept of the triplets representing different things with Ki-chan's energy and quick temper Hi-kun's cunning and terrible temper and Na-kun's kindness and slow but scary temper
I avoided this story due to never reading a good triplet story but my friend recommended it and I don't regret reading it
Keep on the writes
CrystalKnight chapter 10 . 9/18/2015
Wow those kids are really messed up like they don't have all of their emotions like they each have a separate set of completely different emotions kinda like a person with MPD each triplet is designed to handle different emotions with Tsunayoshi the main personality who made the others to protect his I know you probably designed them this way but I can't help but comment
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 10 . 8/29/2015
Getting awesome good can't wait for more
belladu57 chapter 10 . 8/29/2015
Very good
Akayuki Novak chapter 10 . 8/29/2015
*sweat drop* Ahahahaha... Hide-kun activated his flames. Nicely done. And Tsuna made them worry. Not so good.
Arco-Alaude chapter 9 . 8/1/2015
Ryohei POV needs more capitalized thoughts and more annoying extremes to the extreme! If you can spawn a hibari POV that would be cute. And I can yamamoto be slighty gay for tsuna LOL. THIS STORY IS AMAZING keep doing what you're doing!.

sidenote: please tell me that your summary has a typo because 3 kids to 2 teens is scaring me. Good luck and update fast :))
Akayuki Novak chapter 9 . 6/18/2015
Ryohei is very... *lips quirk* Extreme. And surprisingly easy to understand. Honestly just flat-out cute.
Rikka-tan chapter 9 . 6/17/2015
Hibari is really cute.

And totally a tsundere lol. Tsundere Hibari... Tsunbari? XD

Tsuna should give him a pet name. He really should. Hi-chan? Kyou-chan? :p
(So that the cuteness meter will go overload)

And probably Ryohei too. Since Tsuna wasn't allowed to call him Onii-san.

Thanks for the chapter!
angel chapter 9 . 6/15/2015
Please update soon, I love the triplets they're just so adorable :)
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