|Reviews for Fractured Lives|
| Daidairo chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
I must admit, although the genre and some of the themes are not completely to my taste, I do like the concept of this and am quite interested to see where it will lead.
Good luck in writing the next chapter!
| Nameless Knight chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Yesssss save those Chimeriad. Be the real hero Elle! Pffft, Muzét can never escape being the catalyst. Or crazy. This is about as relevant as Zumey will ever be haha.
Maybe it's different in your location, but for me commas never go across as question mark-double quote-comma(?",). It's somewhat jarring to read actually. Nothing but ellipses in a speech should be replaced by "Character remained silent" or such.