this is well done and the fight scene was realistic

Read half of it and quit. I understand it's very difficult to google random Japanese names in order to use them in Naruto universe (Malik, Tali, fucking lmao).
Academy level Naruto beating jonin? No. Academy Naruto wouldn't beat an average Genin (Tenten). The ONLY reason Naruto beat Mizuki (his academy sensei) was due to Tajuu Kage Bunshin and Miazuki was surrounded. This Naruto doesn't have that Jutsu and extra years in the academy for whatever small experience he could get.
Yami Naruto is not stronger, out of the blue, than normal Naruto. Yami Naruto is not stronger than 10 people who attacked him, 3 of whom are Jonin.

You ruined your own story. Literally plot armor no Jutsu. This is fiction, you define your own universe, based on original, which does not mean pulling plot holes out of your ass.

Please, NO Hinata and No Sakura. Every story has them as a pairing, especially Hinata. So annoying. She should have died instead of Neji.

And we never heard from him again.

When are you going to update this?

It could be better.

I love how broken this is honestly.

Holy hell! OP game abuse Yami is actually amazing. I love the unique random event, and the OC coming to her senses. Glad logic worked.

Gamer elements and Dark Naruto? If this doesnt become some edgy power wank fest, I will read every chapter.

This is fucking awesome.

Great job. I hope he grinds.

Someone older and powerful should be the other. IF you are going to use Kin, I hope she is much stronger.

Why did you stop pls update

Please update story

keep up the good work and please update xD