Very nice job ...

What a great piece! I absolutely loved each one!

I really liked this. I liked how you structured it starting early in the morning, and showing IK moving through his day, with the reactions of all the different people he encountered. I think those reactions were rich and varied and accurate. Nothing was exaggerated. If I were to have suggested anything it would be maybe a fellow agent who had a positive attitude to counterbalance the stinker.

This is excellent.