Reviews for Better Off Forgotten
Norris chapter 1 . 3/13
What utter rubbish
Guest chapter 51 . 2/16
I'm mad at you because you're a good writer and I read this whole story. But it was so unsatisfying. I was waiting and waiting for the true take down of Draco. But it never came. You wrote him as a sympathetic character to the end. When he was HORRIBLE. I expected better for Hermione.
InARealPickle chapter 25 . 12/21/2022
This entire story is just one giant glorification of rape. Sickening.
the-cari-moose chapter 50 . 12/6/2022
honestly loved this whole fucking ride and both endingsif I had read this years ago I would have been so concerned with how dark this is but after getting through the cultural staple that is manacled (on my second attempt) this seems almost fluffy in comparison

the writing is so excellent throughout and I was hooked the entire time
Yuritzi M chapter 46 . 10/18/2022
I am so glad that this isn’t the final ending
MotekElm chapter 51 . 7/21/2022
I like this ending. it's satisfying, and Draco is redeemed, although I'm disappointed at the lack of revenge.
MotekElm chapter 46 . 7/21/2022
yuck on the evil ending
MotekElm chapter 45 . 7/21/2022
yay, now it's getting really good
Montana65 chapter 11 . 6/20/2022
I’m on reread number idk, and just had the thought today that they all get sort of proportional comeuppance in the end. Marcus and Theo and Draco all represent different levels of betrayal and stakes, and I had never thought of that in the abstract. Zabini as well for that matter… no atonement-just death, 11 years of misery and correcting a wrong, 3 years of misery and correcting my a wrong, and Marcus lives his life of wedded bliss. It seems important narratively that the premise isn’t the problem, that the other characters had other options, that while Draco was a dick, it really didn’t have to be that way. Like, Theo and Marcus didn’t have to tamper with birth control. Theo ultimately chose not to protect his father. Obviously Malfoy’s behavior lands as reprehensible throughout, but I hadn’t thought about the ways that is juxtaposed against vivid examples of alternate choices he could have made. Thanks for writing!
Raman Sohal chapter 49 . 6/17/2022
I still don't think the bastard deserves forgiveness for what he did
Raman Sohal chapter 46 . 6/17/2022
this is so fucking sick!
i really hate this alternative ending!
i really hope the revenge to be horribly sweet!
fucking ferrety bastard needs to know he can't just do anything he pleases. bloody Slytherin a**hole...
i personally wanna choke him to death
gingkoleaf.bub chapter 21 . 5/17/2022
this is great writing so far, but also very disturbing and dark. I definitely need a light palate cleanser before continuing.
gingkoleaf.bub chapter 21 . 5/17/2022
consent is not even a word in the pureblood vocab. their conversations are so disturbing
gingkoleaf.bub chapter 18 . 5/17/2022
just realized that if I treat this universe as a dystopia, it is less frustrating
gingkoleaf.bub chapter 16 . 5/17/2022
oh no this is really sad. i was not prepared for that. the poor girl
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