This was bloody brilliant. Creative, well-thought out, and wonderfully written. Loved that you included both endings and that you aren't writing a sequel to it. Please, keep writing. The world needs more creativty...especially now.

This's incredibly overrated story that has far too many cliches and inconsistencies to be taken seriously. Find dialogue formulaic, silted and nonsensical

I don't think this is Dramione story. It's Cho Chang story...

astoria so disgusting...

wow! seriously astoria? after your quidditch team?

ferret? seriously? hahahaha

love you ginny!

I'm crying... they tried to helped her and still remembered what she has done...ㅠ.ㅠ

Phew! Your story was compelling, considered and complex. (Accidental alliteration, haha). So much talent and thank you for a ‘proper’ wonderful ending.

This is so evocative. Your writing is superb...

Narcissa and Lucius are bone-chilling...

Well done. A very strong story, very original. I (think I) liked that you regularly teased us with solutions to Hermione's problems, but only to have them not play out as expected.

The ending was strong too, thanks.

Kingsley is hateful...

Poor, poor Cho...

Excellent tension-building in this chapter...