Reviews for Better Off Forgotten |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sé que se lo merecía pero el sufrimiento de Draco hace que prefiera el final alternativo... Por el momento. Al menos ahí Hermione tuvo una gran y amorosa familia con alguien que amaba. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Si bien no me gusta que en este final Draco se saliera con la suya sin consecuencias al menos me alegra que de cierto modo Hermione tuvo un "final feliz". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Espero que Theo y Cho se puedan reconciliar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me gusta"Hadrian" porque se parece a mi nombre: Adriana. Amé que Umbridge fuera traicionada por Rita. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a joy to read. One of the best crafted and well rounded stories i have read on here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Si es Tchaikovsky para mí ellos están bailando El Vals De La Bella Durmiente. Espero que él bebé sea niña sólo para joder a Narcissa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Muggleborn Alliance is soo interesting! I hope Cho finds a way to circumvent her curse and that Draco burns in 7 kinds of hell! Or atleast that he isn’t let off easyy. Thanks for this gem of a gem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've crafted a beautiful story. I truly feel like you've sat down and mulled over finer details which give it that something extra. I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait for Hermione's memories to return! Really really hoping she gives Draco absolute hell though, 10x worse than she did last time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooww! You must hear this a lot but you're a great writer! Barely a chapter in and i'm hooked. Good premise for a story and looking forward to reading more:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed your story. Some things made me angry but that is a sign of a good story teller. The alternative ending was perfect Pureblood nonsense. The true ending was genius. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really dislike Kingsley in this fic and this chapter just reminded me of that. Hoping the truth about Hermione comes out soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve read this story maybe a half dozen times, and I love it. For some reason, it’s reading a little differently this time around- until this one, I don’t think I picked up the level of “fuck it” Hermione had for the wizarding world at the point she left, and I also didn’t really register that (Malfoy’s interventions aside) she has a decent life in the muggle world. I always love the ways the setting and context choices weave together to form the plots, and the balancing of different points of view, as well as the ways subplots interact. I also love how engaging the story is, and the complexity of the handling of sensitive topics. Astoria gets some slut-shaming, which is then drawn off center by her motivations, eg. desperation for a child. And don’t get me started on Cho, or the juxtaposition of muggle and magical technology for medicine... The world is crazy right now and I hope you and yours are healthy and well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was furious when I read the first ending. Especially her dog charm with a leash. Second ending is obviously way way better and plausible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMYGOD! I FREAKING LOVE YOUR FIC! I've got so many emotions throughout your story that just makes me want to keep reading and reading. Your a very talented writer! I love both versions of your ending. I thought I wouldn't like the second ending but it was great as well. I really look forward to reading more great fics from you. Thank you so much for the great read! I'm definitely glad I tried it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This ending was beautiful |