Reviews for Better Off Forgotten |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really was looking forward to this chapter and you did not disappoint! I loved the meeting and thought that you captured the three Slytherins very well! I am very interested to see what comes next and to see Malfoy in the Muggle world. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco is still an asshole. It's a shame everyone else has grown up and changed a bit while he acts like a school boy still as implied by mudblood. It does seem so he would do that to Hermione. I hope you don't draw this fic out where he does it and Hermione finds out and he falls in love but people tell her the truth and what not...I hope she makes it hard for him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking forward to seeing what Hermione is up to, and their first encounter since she was obliviated. Especially if Hermione will still "remember" him as you put it with Katie and Flint. Love the character you have created for Draco. Still judgemental, privileged, and expecting the world to work in his favour. Will create extra trouble for him I think, and will add some interesting story line as he tries to woo Hermione. I am also intrigued to see if anything between Lucious and Beauxbatons develops and if they learn that they have been welcoming the muggleborns. Good work as always! Look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How many chapters will this story have? I really like it and i hope its a "slow dramione" With lots of chapters :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am going to love reading how the tables will turn on Draco...CAn't wait to read about what Hermione been doing and her first meeting with Draco...update more soon. |
![]() ![]() Definitely not what I was expecting. I was surprised with Draco and Astoria not having Scorpius. I feel really bad for Draco in all of this. How long after the second chapter is this? I'm not sure I'm understanding the time line completely. I adore this story though and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm completely intrigued and I want to thank you for taking on the topic of infertility. So much HP fanfic operates under the assumption that everyone is super fertile and as someone who just went through 2 years of infertility and 3 miscarriages (we are finally and hopefully pregnant pregnant), I just found it very unbelievable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a nicely written and powerful start. |
![]() ![]() ooooh this is gonna be such a mess for the .plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh, I have a bad feeling about this meeting! Loving every single paragraph, you're an excellent writer who draws your reader in very easily! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully the last we hear from Astoria for a while! Really liked that Ginny ended up with Dean after Harry, nice touch. |
![]() ![]() Ohhhhh i can't wait to hear this! I bet Marcus was a "one night stand" for Katie bell that produced a child and thats what the broom is for and either Theo knows about it or is doing the same thing. |
![]() ![]() Awesome! This story is quickly becoming one of my favourites. I'm always left wanting more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that the purebloods who banish muggleborns find out their population is going down due massive infertility among them. Ginny is pregnant because both Dean and Harry are half-bloods...can't wait to readv where you take this |