Reviews for Better Off Forgotten
Btterflykiss69 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Interesting
anon5082120511 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Wow. I can't believe Ginny hooked up with Dean and got married. Well, I like her, but sometimes I don't because she's so obsessed with the idea of Harry and marrying the heroes of her dreams. Anyway, I was sad not to see Hermione in the chapter. It's a necessary transitory chapter I see before we see our favorite know-it-all. In the original HP series in the epilogue, it mentions Draco and Astoria and their son at the train station. It's a shame we didn't get to see their dynamics. I am a fan of HG/DM, so a cheating Astoria helps set up a clean slate for them to begin. I am sad she miscarried, but it's disgusting how she has sex with so many men. Desperation. Is Marcus' goddaughter related to Katie?
anon5082120511 chapter 2 . 10/4/2014
Goodbye, Hermione! This brings up a lot of concerns. If all that's left in magical Britain is halfbloods and pure bloods, what will happen to the squib problem? Will it increase? I have suspicions that it will, but I don't know how you will approach this.
anon5082120511 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
This plot is very original. I am a very obsessed reader with this pairing and I haven't seen something like this before so I am looking forward to how you plan to expand this. Your writing seems great so far and I haven't read any grammatical or spelling errors.
kaoru104 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Oh man, I was hoping we would get to see Hermione dropped off in the middle of no where confused. I wonder when we finally do catch up to Hermione if there will be a recap of her past four years, or something. But this is still 10x better! Off with Asotria's head :] I wonder what the 3 men will get up to talking about.

Thank you for the quick update!
Grovek26 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
An excellent chapter. I can see all sorts of icy looks being exchanged as Draco has stern words with his mum about encouraging his wife to take exercise in the form of Quidditch, which she obviously took the wrong way!
Down the pub, I take it manly discussions on the subject of fertility, etc will be on the agenda? Invitations to the muggleborns who will be courted enthusiastically by those who sneered at them before? You're setting up for all sorts of shenanigans.
Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
I like this story, but want happened to them forgetting their memories or did I just miss something? I'm just kind of confused. I really did like this chapter and I am really looking forward to more of this. I think the next chapter will be very interesting, very interesting indeed...
It's rose hun chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Plot twist, due to the ministries removal of all muggleborns there is now no chance of fertility among purebloods married to other purebloods due to inbreeding.

I do love this story, it has a nice story line but what happened with Hermoine?
Elased chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
This is a pretty interesting concept to Memory loss story. And you writing has been charming and descriptive as usual.
It irks me how Harry and Ginny seemed to be having a happy life without Hermione. I would have expected Harry to find a way to overthrow the law to get his best friend back.
I can't wait to see Hermione's life in muggle world. At 26, she probably would be very successful in career and in a commited, long termed relationship, and then Draco's reappearance to push everything off balance.
It doesn't seem the muggleborns magic is taken though (just forgotten). It would certainly be interesting to find a Hermione who knows about her own magic and could control it (after all, she always had incredible control over magic), despite not having actual training over it. I can't wait for Hermione to retake her place in magical community, with Draco's help.
I'm getting ahead of myself again. But a promising story by a skilled writer usually has that effect on me. Can't wait to see where you are going with it.
Colubrina chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
I was thrilled to see that you've got an update already. This is as good as the opening promises.

That certainly takes Astoria off the table in a remarkably efficient way. And since you've got Marcus and Katie, already obliviated, bracketed in your summary I'm looking forward to how this meeting with Marcus, Theo and Draco goes and who that broom is for...
anon chapter 2 . 10/3/2014
love it please update !
Clarabelle chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
i can't wait to find out how this will end up. i think Shacklebolt is making a big mistake with this.
Grovek26 chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
A very interesting start.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
O.o This story is awesome! I really hope you'll continue. :)
Colubrina chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
This just gets better and better.
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