Reviews for Better Off Forgotten
Miraellyn chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
Thank you for updating so quickly. I truly enjoy your writing style and the direction this is going. I am intrigued to see how this Unbreakable Vow will be used by both parties, as well as the last part of this chapter. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Fantastic! Very intriguing premise and your writing flows wonderfully. There should be more reviews here.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Gah! Those last 2 lines were hauntingly perfect! I'm so excited, can't wait for the next chapter :D quick question: does obliviating count as harming her, the spell won't work if malfoy does it, surely?
Noname chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
This chapter was excellent ! I was so emotional through out the start of the first chapter and this chapter made me bawl my eyes out hahaha. I can't wait for the next update so please update soon :)
sundance1989 chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Very interesting so far update soon please
Matts Miss chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Refreshing concept, I can't wait to read more
catsgotmytongue chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Hmmm...why does Narcissa want Draco to be connected to Hermione? Why so firm about it?
Maybe she knows the coming generations of wizards will be squibs. Having magically potent descendants in the outside via Draco and Hermione may be part of her plans.
I know...just mere mental masterbation on my part.
shaymars chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Now she has been oblivated I can wait for the run in between her and Draco and how she looks and what she is doing and what is going to happen..was there some type of interaction between them before she completely left and she had his kid...really interesting in what he finds ...updaate more soon
EmilyWoods chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
GREAT STORY...
Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
I'm really enjoying this and it is a very interesting concept! Great work!
Sarah chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
This is amazing. Can't wait to read more.
Colubrina chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Oh, an excellent and interesting start! I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Very interesting. I'm curious for more!
kaoru104 chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
this story sounds soooo good! I'm excited to read more and see where it goes.
Miraellyn chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
Wow! I love the way you took this and I can't wait to read more.
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