Reviews for Better Off Forgotten |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating so quickly. I truly enjoy your writing style and the direction this is going. I am intrigued to see how this Unbreakable Vow will be used by both parties, as well as the last part of this chapter. I look forward to the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() Fantastic! Very intriguing premise and your writing flows wonderfully. There should be more reviews here. |
![]() ![]() Gah! Those last 2 lines were hauntingly perfect! I'm so excited, can't wait for the next chapter :D quick question: does obliviating count as harming her, the spell won't work if malfoy does it, surely? |
![]() ![]() This chapter was excellent ! I was so emotional through out the start of the first chapter and this chapter made me bawl my eyes out hahaha. I can't wait for the next update so please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting so far update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Refreshing concept, I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm...why does Narcissa want Draco to be connected to Hermione? Why so firm about it? Maybe she knows the coming generations of wizards will be squibs. Having magically potent descendants in the outside via Draco and Hermione may be part of her plans. I know...just mere mental masterbation on my part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now she has been oblivated I can wait for the run in between her and Draco and how she looks and what she is doing and what is going to happen..was there some type of interaction between them before she completely left and she had his kid...really interesting in what he finds ...updaate more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT STORY... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this and it is a very interesting concept! Great work! |
![]() ![]() This is amazing. Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, an excellent and interesting start! I look forward to seeing where you take this. |
![]() ![]() Very interesting. I'm curious for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story sounds soooo good! I'm excited to read more and see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I love the way you took this and I can't wait to read more. |