oh wow, the malfoy family is somehow worse than I thought?

6 chapters in and I already want to murder him

oh come on! this is just... such a cheap way to invalidate a relationship. making one side a clear villainess who is habitually unfaithful. why is this necessary? to allow draco to be unfaithful in the future and readers dont have to feel bad? it severely hampers the potential depths of characters and their dynamics by simply creating a good or bad binary. Marriages can be dysfunctional without an obvious villain.

ok but Astoria is canonically not a bigot. shes fine, just a regular person. And I really hope this doesn't have Ron-bashing. No need to make the "competing" love interests into petty villains. It's such a... easy way out?

Some plot pieces are shaky. But it’s an engaging read. Lots of knots in my stomach in some parts. I’m reading this post Tiktok drama of modern warrior and informed consent and sexual assault. I think this story delves into the grey and murky areas of SA and consent vs informed consent. A great story.

Sorry, I can't stomach this garbage where women are to be used, manipulated, abused, lied to, dismissed and considered chattel and are expected to appreciate it. Total bullshit.

Are readers really supposed to think Draco's manipulations are "romantic" and not subversive and abusive? Do you really think we're that stupid?

Now see, I would love it if this story went in the direction of Hermione recalling everything - EVERYTHING - on her own and so when Draco comes slime'ing around, she can Imperius him, then Lucius, then SnakeyKingsley into justice but I'm betting Draco slimes all over BrainDeadHermione and does lots of things to her and readers are supposed to think it's somehow "romantic". Puke.

**pukes all over Draco**

**twice**

Glad Draco is having such a shitty time.

Um, no, FlakeyDrakey, Kings is NOT a "political animal" - he's a DE bootlicker, pure and simple, else the shafting of all muggleborns would never have been allowed to happen and Umbridge would have been fired or transferred to another country if he didn't have the balls to fire her. Oh, wait, Kings HAS no balls. He obviously couldn't care less if Hermione is able to undo her parents' Obliviation which of course she can't do if she doesn't remember that she did it in the first place... He's a truly shitty Minister. Bet he blows Lucius twice daily. And swallows.

Hermione should have broken her wand and thrown the pieces into Umbitch and Lucius' eyes.

So Kingsley bent over and licked DE boots while fucking over the entire muggleborn "race" and muggleborns are supposed to be grateful. Got it.

Plothole - muggleborns who had married into half-blood/pureblood families. Are they to be jerked away from their spouses and kids?

I think this a worst end Than the alternative one.
I Can't believe Than 7 yeras of memories lost can deserve a punishment as to see a son dead.
Anyway, Thank you for sharing the story

Would be brilliant if Ron cummed up Hermione and Draco later licked out her unwashed pussy! *Taste the Ron-Blow* lol lol lol

just finished binging this. nice work! for anyone debating if they should read this, definitely read it!