Reviews for Have Fox, Will Travel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so full of bullshit it's incredible. I mean to write so much nonsense in 9 chapters is a feat. Bijuu are not demons and did you just compare them to horcruxes? This makes zero sense whatsoever. You need to think before you write things and not just put down the first thing that comes to mind. This can pass if you're twelve. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There I was, reading a very interesting story. And when I got to the end of chapter 39 I realized there isn't a chapter 40 yet. I am loving this story, and I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. Quite happy to see this update again. I'm curious in what Harry will ultimately decide to do with Teddy. |
![]() ![]() Loved it. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muhahahahaha... Chaos. Lots of Chaos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! Hot looting action! Shame they didn't find that treasure though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, Lord Harry stories have shopping trip chapters that are boring to everyone but the author. I think it was dogbertcarrol who summed it up shortly. "He bought a trunk, and whatever else the plot requires or I might find interesting". Reason I bring this up? This is a Ninja Harry Story, and he hasn't looted the shit out of gato's hideout yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the fight. It shows weaknesses that Harry has been blind to. He even took away the wrong lesson [always have dragon hide coat] vs. [Learn to do without] I like it because this Harry is arrogant, he occasionally gives sasuke a run for his money. I do appreciate that you are moving him away from that mindframe. I also like Harry's prison funhouse, and how he is handling it. In the amine people angrily demand secrets of jutsu and instantly get answers. A competent and quiet enemy must blow their minds! |
![]() ![]() *Bloody hell, you're like a female version of Hermione* ...like a FEMALE version of Hermione. ...Hahahahaha! Best typos are the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No bridge named after Naruto. Read one time travel fic where that was his primary goal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just thought of another problem. Narto, heh, Narto's teammates are retainers of the Namikaze clan. In an ambush situation, enemies are gonna see High value target 1, High value target 2, and future random corpse. His disguised generic identity gives him the opposite problem of being recognized. But Kakashi died to protect him in canon, so it's a hypothetical problem at best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, it's like star trek, if they used the transporter to fix everything, no one would watch. But Naruto is adept at breaking things, so it's actually kind of nice to see him lose it in a non blood red haze. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the new stuff. It was excellent, if a long time coming. I can see why Harry is frustrated with Teddy wanting to become a shinobi. Many HP/Naruto stories have Harry being allowed to attend Hogwarts even when he is a shinobi. Not sure how that would really fly. Couldn't Teddy technically quite after his OWLs? It is legal to leave school then as a qualified wizard. Isebas |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I can just see Harry snapping on Anko next chap lol. Harry's irritation rubbed off on me and now I'm irratated for no reason uhghh... Can't wait for your next chap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the slut is spreading her legs already. As expected. |