Awesome chapter. You make Harry sound so mysterious in that letter that I hope you write the receivers reaction.

awesome chapter

Harry is practically offering to adopt Naruto, Naru-chan must be so overwhelmed!

Omg I love this story and its long chapters please update as soon as possible

Good stuff I hope you keep writing

Amazing new chapter, thank you :)) I love it

I have to say this is one well thought out hp/naruto crossover. I have seen a few and most don't make any since to me. Keep up the great work.

Sorry, but your reasoning on Naruto in the closet is really weak. If the only reason to justify it is that you wanted the plot to go there then maybe that says your plot idea should have been changed?

Him freezing at first is fine but considering you went with the fanon cliche of the mobs chasing Naruto as a kid it isn't very plausible that he would freeze for this length of time and just stay in the closet when he has the ability to easily bust out. This would hardly have been a shock compared to how he was treated and you showed his reaction to this type of treatment to be anger and rebellion. The way you have him act now is completely out of character for how you portrayed him. It's weak and make your Naruto seem completely lame. It's the typical mistake a fanfic author makes when they paint themselves into a corner and insist on forcing the plot to go the way they want regardless of whether it makes sense for the story they've been telling. If you wanted him to freeze you shouldn't have powered him up to the over the top amount you did by giving him all the clones, the training and the huge cache of knowledge he took with him. He has now friends and basically family in Japan, he's had hundreds of clones existing for thousands of hours greatly increasing his mental age and so on.

this is a great story! i'm glad I found it and cant wait to see what will happen when harry finds out about naruto's abilities

I love it I hope you update again soon.

HAVE RON RANT AT GINNY!

Finally got a moment to review your story, and I have to say I really like it. I'm glad to see that the line at the end of book 6 didn't just put off me of her character (granted I never really warmed up to Ginny considering her introduction in book 2.)
I'm really interested to see what direction this will be taking and how Harry, Naruto and Teddy will grow as a family. I wonder if anyone from Konoha will figure out that Naruto left willingly. Will we see a bit of what is happening in Konoha soon?

Seems like an interesting story, hoping to see more of it. :)

wow! eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Ginny really exploded