Great chapter. I really liked the glimpse at Harry at the end (had Hermione rescued her parents yet?). I'm looking forward to Naruto meeting up with Harry and Dudley.

I think itz good that others plans are going to get messed up because he really shouldn't let others control his life and should wise up to all the manipulation in his life

great update

Harry is his living relative!

Good job there my friend, I love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter of Have Fox Will Travel. Keep up the good work, and I'm happy to inform you that there were few if any mistakes that I could see.

I like the chapter.

Love it!

Awesome chapter.

I enjoy how you have started this. I am eagerly awaiting your next update

Awesome story so far. I don't see why he would be tired because his clones where tired. Clones can't feel pain because anything that can damage them will only make them go poof so why would tiredness matter?

I like what I see so far. This story is a nice break from the standard "Hired Konoha ninjas" idea, and the buildup you have done so far makes me want to stick around to see what will come next.

One issue, however, was that you put the Japanese names for certain techniques that are not well-known in their Japanese form by the fandom. The water walking and tree climbing/surface walking techniques in particular confused me at first. It's fine to put Kage Bunshin or Henge or other really well-known techniques in their Japanese forms; in fact, many readers prefer them to be in their Japanese forms, but other techniques are usually better in their English form. If you do put them in Japanese, adding a quick translation in parentheses is a good way to make sure that the readers know what you're talking about.

Even with that, this story is coming along excellently. I really look forward to seeing Naruto meet and interact with characters from the Potterverse, and I'm also curious as to who else is going to be using the portals, since apparently Yugao will have to come through at some point.

Anyway, you've captured my interest. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed reading the chapters very much

I think that it is both an ability of canon and fanon, Jenn.

Canon has the Kage Bushin's memories being transferred to the 'caster' whilst the Fanon expanded on it a little. :)

I wonder where Naruto may go next and if Naoki may find out about Naruto's tenant?

Excellent story so far! I look forward to reading more!

Love this story and can't wait to read more