Reviews for Have Fox, Will Travel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is Harry going to be an adult when he adopts Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do believe the 'clones receive updates' thing is canon, and the whole reason naruto is limited in his clone usage by sage mode (the clones up on the mountain risking loss of concentration if bombarded with to much info etc.) Further, the explaination for why the memory is shared with all remaining clones is easy to find, the kage bunshin splits your chakra evenly between all your clones, so if one of them disappears, its chakra is evenly spread out between all the remaining clones and the Original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm a bit disapointed that Naruto is stupid enough to give all the information he has over to the guy. It just screams that Konoha / Akutsuki will nicely ask and be given the information to track down Naruto at some later date. Finally, how on Earth is Yugao going to be involved here? She wasn't even mentioned specifically yet, and Naruto sure doesn't 'miss' her or have any sort of named relationship with her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I love this story, it's great and you arte doing a fabulous job with it. I can't wait to read what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice solid way to allow the transition between worlds. Nice to see a solid method rather than a ninja is just that flexible mentally. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() A good chapter I look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just why I have tjis strange feeling that when Emperor will hear about Hidden Continent mess he will be most displeased? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sarotubi is acting far too late. I wonder what awaits Naruto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start, and a promising premise. Your depiction of how Naruto escaped Konoha, and how he pretty much ransacked the village before leaving, reminded me quite a bit of another fic, titled "To Be A Hero." Have you heard of it, and was it a partial inspiration for this story? Looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good plan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only thing i can point out is that the date at the begining of the chapter is 1998 but when naruto is running away its 1990, thats all, and YAY something different to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story you have here! I hope you continue this as I would like to see what you do with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great start to an interesting looking story. I can't wait to see how it is going to develop as time goes on. Also, I am glad to see you back up, and running. Your stories are always interesting to read, and I had missed them. Mcv |