Shame this stopped here.

The solution for his son would be to have him graduate from the Academe at age 10 (he could get plenty of assistance from his family) followed by a 7 year C/D rank mission at Hogwarts paid for by Harry and an automatic promotion to Chunin if he gets his NEWTS.

A shinobi prankster at Hogwarts [shudder]. Lots of fun.

that is good. update soon please.

What they are doing to Anko is blatant bullying. The woman stopped years ago. She might not have apologized, and frankly i wont too, but you could have ignored here after that. It's been 2 years of unprovoked attacked...just because they are rich and they have a powerful family and Harry's temper. Naruto and his peers have been nothing but bullies who acted like they are above everyone.

If people want a story exactly like the anime why are they reading fanfiction?

personally i like it when things are switched up.

technically Momoiro means "Peach Color"

Wow. This. Is. Amazing! I couldn’t stop reading it, I literally stayed up from 10pm to 4am to continue reading and I keep telling myself “alright, just one more chapter before bed” but I couldn’t stop. I love the shinobis reaction when they discover Takeshi magical abilities. Hey how are you gonna explain an Obscurus to them cause I’m really curious oh how they’re gonna handle that part. Anyway great story, PLEEEEEEEAAAASE WRITE MOOOOORE! I can’t wait.

If Naruto was raised since birth like Harry Potter In Petunia's house then and only then would Naruto receive equivalent suffering to Harry Potter because Naruto is an independent strong willed young man who knows/has powers and abilities and skills while Harry Potter was just a defenseless baby who was taught who, who was trained since birth to be a slave now what you're trying to do is say this is what Harry Potter could do durrr, that still doesn't make sense, you can't just dump someone like a child, it's so weak and defenseless that everything you do to it and everything you expose it, it will affects the child so deeply that it becomes a part of them AKA Harry Potter thanks himself in the deepest part of himself Harry Potter doesn't call himself Harry Potter, Harry Potter calls himself freak abomination monster ungrateful useless lazy etc etc etc that his full name to his own self. That's another reason Naruto in this fiction seems to be sent to petunia when he's five Harry Potter was sent to Petunia when he was not even a month old Harry Potter was raised to be physically mentally spiritually a slave he usually was molded him to become a glass sword, a One time, then discard uses weapon, that's what Harry Potter became something that's used to being used one time and then thrown away If someone else would try to treat him decently it'll be so foreign that Harry Potter would probably think it's a trap a trick a manipulation he wouldn't be able to understand someone cares about him and wants the best for him and even if it's spelled out plane for day for all to see Harry Potter a part of Harry Potter at least would still say it's a trick it's a trap it's a manipulation they want something out of you. Once is an accident twice is a coincidence and thrice is enemy action this is a thought process of Harry Potter.

While I personally hate the canon Galleon exchange rate (It makes no sense with how the Weasleys treat money, and with the prices of actual things), I don't mind it that much in fanfiction if handled well. I've long considered the Galleon to not actually be gold, or at least contain very little of it. Either that or it's a construct made by the Goblins that can't be melted down.

Because 35 pounds for a wand makes no sense whatsoever. (There are other examples of pricing, but this is the most egregious. And if the "first wand is subsidized" for each student going to Hogwarts, there's no way the Weasleys would be stupid enough not to take advantage of that, if it will only be more expensive later.)

It's definitely fanon that dispelled clones give memories to existing clones, but I don't think people will mind that much.

I personally don't use that particular bit of fanon, but only because it makes the jutsu even more OP than it already is for Naruto, and I'm not that great at writing for characters that are so far above the level of the rest of the characters.

He hates the Idea of people rifling through his mind yet he so freely threatens kurama with it. He has experienced the horribleness of being a prisoner and a tool, yet he so easily treats kurama the same, even going so far as to casually call her a creature and a pet.

Great story! I love how Harry interacts with his family. How does the situation with Teddy go?

the plot started off nice though a little bit... boring, but then harry got chakra and the kyuubi too. wow its like reading bleach with the bargain sale for powers and that particular author trying to fit every single one to a single character daaaaaaamn. the writing is nice though so points for you. im going to read more of it, maybe it will get better.

woah! big balls hiruzen! i like!

What the heck does "dattebayo" mean and why does Naruto keep saying it?

I really appreciate all the little notes at the end explaining the translations and clarifying historical facts. It kinda reminds me of myself as a writer coz I usually have a ton of AN but it's all explanations especially if the story has a set date or timeline it occurs