Hey, I found an error on the dates here. The beginning of the chapter mentioned it was 1998, a year after the Battle of Hogwarts and Naruto was 8 years old. It then said it took about two months to prepare to leave but it says 1990 when he was about to leave. Just thought you'd like to know. The story is good so far!

Dumbledore bashing, wish you'd mentioned that before getting this far. Dick.

Maybe instead of all the retarded, redundant Japanese, you just write in English, retard? Oh wait, you were too brain dead to finish this, so you abandoned it like this stupid fucking retard you are. Fuck you.

Love the story! Really great writing :)

Loved this story, hope to see more of it.

It's not just Naruto being Kurama's Jinchuriki that was the issue to his shit chakra control it was also the fact he's an Uzumaki.

this fanfic is unnatural and not in a good way

Um...was this ever going to be continued? I know I've read this befote.

Whoop! That was a bit of a miscalculation indeed. Poor Kurama-chan.

And the kyuubi wakes! though she (nice analogy to seperation of yin and yang for genders) must be quite confused by the behaviour her jailor has shown her. is definitely interesting.

Look out Akasutki. Harry potter has entered Konoha. And he won't let your schemes win when he learns of your plots.

Oof. Harry didn't see that coming. Shinigami you sneaky bastard. When the two were bound in your stomach, you didn't split the bond when you inflicted your punishment did ya?

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

You might want to consider possibly adding those translations at the top of the chapter, since I got rather confused hearing Ha no Noudo, Kinobori no Waza, Nawanuke no Jutsu and Suimen Hokou no Waza, I'd never read the exercises called by their Japanese names before.

But hey, solid chapter, a good motivation for Naruto leaving, and a new idea for a story, of Naruto in the Harry Potter Universe, that's one I haven't really seen much of. In fact, I might even do my own iteration of this, of Naruto as a 16/18 year old being betrayed, his loved one dying, and in anger, he uses an unknown Jutsu which plops him right in front of Harry, who was begging for a saviour or protector after another evening of abuse.

Could be fun!

Thanks for the release Author-Chan,i enjoyed your story immensely,i'm looking forward for more releases soon