Reviews for The Prince of Atlantis High |
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phngolovely chapter 13 . 7/26 omg this is a cute and heart warming and adorably nerdy. You could have written 100 more chapters and I’ll be following til the very end. But it was a happy ending and I’m moving on to your next fic |
mycookiesgaara chapter 6 . 1/12/2021 whoa...if that is how Nico reacts to Gabe abusing Percy as a human. I wonder how he would've reacted if he walked in on that as a demigod. I think he would've dragged Gabe down into Tartarus. |
inlovewithtomriddle chapter 7 . 10/26/2020 The "Hoe do you know?" spelling mistake made me spit out my juice. Happy accidents are amazing |
boscanclouds chapter 1 . 2/3/2020 what does (beard) mean? |
StayGold13 chapter 13 . 8/18/2019 I loved this so much. It was so cute and I loved every moment. Awesome job. |
Dandelion's Lollipop chapter 13 . 8/8/2019 I spend three days looking for this fic... It's amazing. And I can totally see a sequel where Percy find out that he and Triton are brothers and his father wasn't a marine or something like that! I love the fic, but to be true I have to say that there is a couple of thing that stand out... In one chapter you say that Hades' only girl is in a boarding school and that his only son is Nico, then in the next chapter Bianca is a cheerleader and Hazel is Nico's sister and Thanatos is the big brother... That get me confused while reading it... But that doesn't mean that I don't love the fix. It's one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing it |
Persassylover chapter 9 . 6/14/2018 I went to an avenger movie and some little kids dressed up as D.C. characters and were so confused why superman, batman and wonder woman weren't in the movie. They literally had no idea. |
ferrarivol6 chapter 13 . 3/28/2018 Amazing Story! I like how it's a change from your other Percy and Nico fics, but it still has your unique twist. |
Ethan76 chapter 11 . 12/27/2017 Okay, here I am still pondering this acronym PFLAG after two chapters and I still don't know what it means. Mind you, when I was in High School the community changed names several times, mostly as they grew to support a wider group of people. It's not that I'm unwilling to google the damn thing, it's just that I feel like during the club's first meet they would likely say the full name. (I get that LAG likely means "lesbian and Gay," but what is PF?Googled it, so it's "Parents Family and Friends of Lesbians and Gays. Well that stops my un-asked question, I was about to say of who brings their parents to a club meeting. Personally, I think you should mention the full name (once) because that explains a lot... As a club, who is there, etc. (It's obvious what it supports, but this rather than LGBTQ indicates -at least as a name- that your supporting the community, not just part of them.) |
Ethan76 chapter 9 . 12/27/2017 The story is really good but the dialogue feels clumsy in some areas, like when he came out to his friends, his mom, and the teacher interaction at the end of the chapter. If possible, I would recommend rewriting those portions so they feel more natural. Maybe making them sound surprised but draw it out more (It depends on how you go about it, it just sounds fake currently). I ignored it until this chapter, because the story is/was interesting. But it is definately something to consider. Also, is half the friggan' school secretly gay? I mean I can understand pressure causing a lot of people to hide it, but how do all the gay students "just know?" I feel like every few chapters we run into more gay couples. Wouldn't it make more sense to slowly encounter more people as the story progresses, showing that it's natural and normal for someone to feel that way to say, Percy/Annabeth? That being said, I am really pleased with this story so far. |
AsheVelos chapter 11 . 11/25/2017 Okay so unless I'm wrong which I don't think I am don't blue and white roses mean unattainable purity or that Percy/Nico are not virgins like I said I could be wrong and am looking to far into it but I'm curious if that's what you meant |
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 13 . 8/14/2017 omg is Triton Percy's brother and stuff. is Percy's dad really dead or is he alive. did his dad have Triton before he met Percy's mom and because of that they both don't have dads. or it just a coincidence that they look alike. |
Kynmu99 chapter 6 . 7/27/2017 Why does the the first lunchroom where they all start sitting down next to Nico remind me of Sky High? I love it! |
Rayvin587 chapter 1 . 6/14/2017 I NEED a small one shot of Triton and Percy and everyone finding out WHY they look alike! I don't know if they are half siblings or it's just the di Angelo's shared tastes! But other than that going on in my head, I think that this is my favorite of your multichapter stories so far! Amazing! |
Darkness Death and Riches chapter 12 . 1/10/2017 I did not plan on reading this almost an exact year apart from my last reading, it just happened. I also want to reach into the past and throttle myself because I know that I meant Nicercy, I hope you know that I meant Nicercy, so idk why I said Percico! UGH, I'm such a failure... (I know I'm not, but I'm just being over dramatic) |