|Reviews for Be Careful Making Wishes in the Dark|
| Battyfoox chapter 6 . 5/28
this entire fic was very cash money
| Sarisa2 chapter 6 . 11/15/2019
Hi! I really loved this story! I would really appreciate it if you wrote a sequel! Either that, or could you give me permission to write a sequel?
| Megxolotl chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
I can't believe you: written before NWHS and there are phrases such as
"I like owls" yeah, that you do, Bill.
Also, dare I say that, for being the jerk he is, Bill is pretty endearing at trying to figure human stuff?
Jay you deserve every single kudo you get
| Energy witch chapter 6 . 11/8/2018
Great crossover Fic!
I loved the interaction of the characters with our favorite triangle guy.
On a concerning note, both Dib and Zim learned the hard way not to make deals with Bill Cipher. Then again, why am I curious to see what's it like when Bill possesses another character while said character's astral projection is still around?
Had a feeling Dipper and Dib instantly become friends over their mutual interest on the supernatural n paranormal. ;)
And I'm sure he'd be really excited when he reads the journal (Look at all the logs on the creatures found in gravityfalls) and would gladly help Dipper figure out who the author is. He'd be more than happy to visit Gravityfalls, you can tell he's adventure loving too.
| Vampire Tails chapter 6 . 10/9/2018
Man, this was a brilliant ride from start to finish! I almost forgot how evil and insane Bill could be. xD Since I like reforming him and all.
But he was the evillest in this story, and I commend you for getting all the characters in character, and man.. man oh man.. I LOVED THIS STORY.
Your author's note about cars made me laugh, by the way. Thanks for that. xD
Looking forward to that epilogue or sequel. If it isn't already out, that is.
| King of Fans chapter 6 . 8/29/2018
Why do I have the filling the tallest had a Great feeling after Bill took Zim's body and than gto sad when Zim regained his body.
I look forward to the sequel.
Here are some ideas I had for it:
Dib and dipper geeking Out and becoming BFF over strang things.
Dib falling in love with gravity falls to the point that the only reason why he would leave would be Zim.
Gaz getting super irritated with Mable's cheerfulness and Dipper being practically the same as her brother.
Gaz haveing similar feelings with the handyman, but it being completely offset it by him doing what ever he said, and bonding over games.
Zim going to gravity falls as well to help take done Bill
Zim staying and being interested in gravity falls do the flying saucer underneath the town, researching all the strange creatures, and the energy from the portal.
Dib's father could have a history with Ford. He could have seen him as a hero, and/ or a mentor. So when Ford finished, Dib's father blamed paranormal activities and as a result he want to stay so far away from it, he even denies it. Especially when it means keeping his kids safe.
You can have the primary plot of the story being Dib and dipper discovering the secrets of the memories Bill wanted, Zim's adventures in gravity falls, and Dib finally finding a friend and mentor who understands him and gives the kid positive reinforcement in Ford and Dipper. With it all leading up to the Final fight with Bill.
| King of Fans chapter 5 . 8/29/2018
This is why bill is the best villain of all animation.
| King of Fans chapter 4 . 8/29/2018
Bill you master manipulator. You got Zim underneath your thumb with the being the dissection thing.
Useing Zim as a distraction and wrecking ball is without a doubt the most useful thing Zim has ever been.
I see Ford has their number, or at lest One of Membranes Contacts.
Lately I love the seen at the end. You made a seen worthy of the original invader Zim.
| King of Fans chapter 3 . 8/29/2018
Too manly good things to say.
| King of Fans chapter 2 . 8/29/2018
I love the seen of Dib stealing the clock.
I also loved the seen of Zim's mind scape, falling for bills plan, and Zim still useing his disguise.
Why did I have the filling Bill will steal his body and that torture him in the funnest and most painful of ways.
Lastly every moment of Gaz was great.
| King of Fans chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
I love the idea and the cover image describes the story perfectly. Add in your proper execution and you have a good story here.
| zev.jagalur chapter 6 . 8/23/2018
Just don't have Bill lose in the end in this verse thingy.
| JoeMerl chapter 6 . 5/21/2018
I read this whole story over the long weekend. It's really good! Everyone's really in-character, and kind of a "best version" of their character (the SEN are more competent, Zim seems to care more about GIR, etc.) Bill is pretty much spot-on, and I like how it drew in more of GF. (This has reinvigorated my desire to do an IZ/GF crossover myself.) Great work!
| Phoenix-Inferno18 chapter 6 . 12/14/2017
I loved this! Everyone was so in character and the plot was intriguing and made sense! Great job!
| Raine Staer chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
Bill is really in character. Great job!