Reviews for Surprises
Dichotomus chapter 2 . 2/18
You are an excellent smut writer. My one issue is that Zuko's dimensions are a bit absurd, but over all this is a great fic.
mpowers045 chapter 3 . 1/25/2016
Please continue
Nikolai22 chapter 3 . 9/27/2015
Now what you should do for shits and giggles is have the rest of the Gaang make an unexpected visit to the fire lord...while you know what is going down...(thy could easily sneak in under darkness right up to his window on Appa lol) it would be funny
Nikolai22 chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
I am wondering...were the Rule 34 images based off of this? Or was this based off of the rule 34? Because on rule 34 there are pics depicting the sexual scenes almost to the letter...but this is way easier to get off too cause the idiots on Rule 34 drew 7 year old Zuko and that just...*shivers*
BicolourRaptor chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
well lets see were this go's