Si that a really good ideal? I mean, is okay remember about personas. But his friends and all that he's been through really gonna affect him with grief and sorrow, knows that everyone he know is death. Well maybe aigis because she's a robot but i don't know.

Oh so cool. Please, please continue the story! I cannot wait to see how the semi-emotionless Minato deals with Tatsuya. As well as the rest of the dystopic lunacy that is the setting. I always love Persona crosses, and Mahouka is such an interesting world to throw him into.

This is actually a really interesting concept. I couldn't really find any grammar errors. Kind of saddened by Minato not being able to visit the velvet room (mainly because of Elizabeth) but I. Understand why you made it like like that. The whole concept of "soul magic" being the magic of Persona was a cool idea as well. Looking forward to updates.