Reviews for New Beginnings
Guest chapter 40 . 2/24/2020
At long last, but it is an interesting chapter. Keep up the good work
Nohbody chapter 41 . 2/23/2020
I love it!
Thank you for posting the new chapter, I love how Minato was completely thrown for a loop at the end. I hope the next chapter doesn’t pose as much of an annoyance to write as this one.
Again, thank you for the new chapter, now I should reread the previous chapters.
See Far chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
My favorite writer is back at it again with my favorite story. This chapter was more than sufficient, hope to see more soon.
Koa Eton Anatole chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
Welcome back, Death276-san. And oh boy, you're just got double trouble by Maya Yotsuba and Koichi Saegusa. Wonder how you'll get out of the marriage arrangements?
RedSS chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
Well, Minato, you are f*cked.
garoorar chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Ah that last part made up for the long wait.
Jose19 chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
The Yosutba Clan as a whole is feared by most of the Ten Clans, and the relationship of the Saegusa is bordering hostile,

The Patriarch of the Kudou clan considers the Yosutba a hostile threat to all the clans please read this in the canon.
fallendemon248 chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
I feel a disturbance in the force I think Kouichi is lying and bugged Minato to spy on him
TheyCallMeBeanz chapter 41 . 2/24/2020
It's alive! Great to see you back and can't wait to finally see thier personas in action. I see that her dad is also a man of culture by his approval of best ship.

P.S. I'm going to waste so many hours of my life once P5 Royal comes out.
JumpingToaster chapter 41 . 2/23/2020
This story is unique enough in its combo to be clearly remembered as to what it is about and what is going on. I am concerned that though it updates enough to let the readers know it is alive and not frequently enough to make me worried that 'life happens' will cause this fic to go into limbo. Glad to have this fic though.

Nice progress in the relationship between Minato and Mayumi.
Vangran chapter 41 . 2/23/2020
Welp, I can't say I didn't see THAT coming.
darthrecca chapter 41 . 2/23/2020
I am actually confused on the pairing now. At first I thought it was with Mayumi, then switched to Shizuka, and now again to Mayumi. Also welcome back. It was nice to know that one of my favourite fics hasn't been abandoned or in hiatus. Good chapter, no logical loopholes and no grammatical errors as far as I can remember. Say with the Dark Hour returning, would the Tartarus Tower return? Also are you going to bring back the World/Universe Arcana? Because that is too OP. Not that I mind but it will get more and more difficult for you to keep track of and still make it interesting. From what I understand this world lacks the self-hate and self-destructive humanity so no Erebus. That means Nyx isn't an issue. What are the plans for the final boss?
ZenithTempest chapter 41 . 2/23/2020
I'm glad you're back at this story, though I was more than a little annoyed by the scene between Minato and Maya. Minato is beyond these people at this point. The only reason he doesn't just annihilate everyone in his way is because he doesn't want to stick out and be ostracized, which I understand generally, but in a private meting with Maya that explanation doesn't hold. Him kowtowing to her like that felt more like forced plot than a genuine interaction considering their past meetings.
Though I may be biased here, I actually liked the earlier interactions where Maya, despite her posturing, seemed to treat Minato as something of an equal, one who's power was at least peer to all her knowledge and influence and was worthy of respect. This chapter seemed to thoroughly kill that leaving him in a position similar to Tatsuya: errand boy and pawn. Which is unfortunate since Minato is several leagues stronger than Tatsuya and generally it's problematic to have your crossover protagonist fall into the same narrative-role as the canon protagonist.
QuantumTesseractAlpha chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
I hope you haven't abandoned this story, looking forward for the next chapter...
Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2019
Sorry but I have to drop this cuz you just killed the enjoyment and hype build up for this fic by doing an early reveal. There was barely any character development between those two yet you made Minato spill the beans about his past life. The sudden transitions to another character’s POV is also confusing.
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