Reviews for New Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Way too much first-person perspective combined with viewpoint jumping that doesn't actually say who the new viewpoint character actually is. |
![]() ![]() Update |
![]() ![]() Almost 1 year now since an update, which is quite worrisome for the future of this story. Only the fact that you are still working on other stories prevents full blown panic mode. This is one of the best crossovers on the site, I really hope you didn't get bored of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like kyouko just use minato. really almost or maybe really indirectly forcing him to join the clan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lina is quite important in the story but don’t assume that she can beat Tatsuya since he did beat her. The girl is considered one of the most beautiful, and powerful in the series but has a strong link to Minato’s mother since she is a second cousin to her. This girl is a wonderful pairing for anybody since Miyuki is listed as the most desirable followed by Lina, and Mayumi next in line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() read it twice now good story update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get forgive and forget and his personality but wasn’t that way too light of it he “could have died” if not for his actual strength |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() F*ck you author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minato is an idiot. Pharos warned him WARNED him but the guy ignored it like an IDIOT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lina is getting too close for something that her agency gonna regret. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH YEAH |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shizuku is cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Chinese terrorist to this novel really irk me so much. F*ck them and f*ck their communism crap. |