Reviews for New Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Minato is about to suffer inside on a whole 'nother level |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your an idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story dropped? |
![]() ![]() When is the next chapter? I’ve been waiting for a long time. Two years actually. Is it dropped? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been binge reading this for almost 2 years now. still hoping for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gonna go to Ken's funeral? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this seems interesting, I wonder if I found a hidden gem. Writing is very good so far, and plot seems good, so good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waiting for you to update this! I love this fic btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is there a change of pov in here? I mean one part was mercenary's captain I think, then next paragraph from MC pov. I need to double read it to see from which pov your writing is, because it's confusing without some mention or specification (like line break). you usually separate pov with line break, when changing them, but in this chapter those I mentioned were not. it's a part after minato summoned thanatos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its dropped? Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please say when you're switching your pov |
![]() ![]() ![]() Say,when are you going to update & make chapter 45 & 46? I can't wait for the next chapters to be updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() About your comment after chapter six, it is okay. Take your time with your writing. The muse is elusive at times, and the real world demanding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() That part with tatsuya I can practically see Yukiko's spirit behind Mayumi smiling "sweetly" at Yu Narukami's spirit who had the same pleading and horrified look with a box of chocolate between those two spirits ah the joys of female cooking |