Reviews for New Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've only reached this far but why do I feel author's writing style took another change as this chapter trully feel bland even with all the action contained within. Lack of dialogues expressing their emotions and thoughts. You just give us straight description in a bland way. I hope as the chapters go on, the story and writing style will improve. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna ask you guys. Will author's grammar become much more better later on? Because this is just horrible to death. I mean, what is this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you sure you are intent on cutting down all future materials? You do realize what you said, right? It means you are cutting off a portion of an entire future content from us readers to ever know in our lives. You don't need to be in our position to know that... isn't very pleasant. If you are worried about taking too long to reach the rest of the novel, my advice is don't. You have already spent a few years to get up to this point, and even if the pace wasn't as quick as you'd like with many ups and downs, I'd say sticking to this pace is fine if it means a more complete content. Besides, even if Mahouka light novel is coming to an end, the same does not necessarily apply to YOUR story. Seeing how you have written many 'original plot points' and inserted it to the midst of Mahouka plot, I have Faith that I am not the only one who wants to see all of the content you have poured your mind into, uncut and true to your original intentions. Keep up the great work! Keep fighting, author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I still can't get over the fact about Minato's personality in this. Oh well, not that I could convince you for that. Even though he's open up to people, he's still a silent and not a talkative person (of course exception could be made but it's a rare thing, even for him) |
![]() ![]() Great job at brought back Persona 2 element |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two things man kyouko doesnt live in the kudou house she is from another family and minoru is sick yes but not all the time so he shoudnt be always in his bed |
![]() ![]() ![]() it official Minato and Mayami are official a couple |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am going to keep reading but i reaally dont think the kudou family will accept an outsider like that and even if they do now minato has to be very careful he could be experimented on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost forgot, what did happen to Minato's headphone and music player. He would usually have them with him almost everywhere he goes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since we got Mayumi, Shizuku, and Lina(?), is it a harem route? Well since Minato is in the 10 master clans it could probably be fine...? Shizuku needs some more love to balance out Mayumi's... |
![]() ![]() ![]() next chapter of Fire Emblem Three Houses. Rising of the Shield Hero and Fire Emblem Three Houses crossover |
![]() ![]() A lot of intriguing developments. It is also hilarious that parasite in a robot fell in love(sort of) with Tatsuya. And his reaction towards his emotions was just gold. I don't mind him having emotions as long as it doesn't diverge too much from his character. I will be looking forward to future chapters as well as your self created arc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... First person pov feels strange for me... Having hard time to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have binged this from start to finish. I don’t regret a single moment. n_n |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter again. I think Minato should take the harem route. Please update soon. |