Reviews for Speak Softly
MaddAlice chapter 35 . 8/3/2013
Loved the story :)
H chapter 35 . 6/7/2013
It's been a long time since you finished this work.
I only have one thing to say: incredible. I love this story, more than any ohter of Ardeth and Evelyn. Sincerily, I think the plot's great, your writting is a good one, with quality, deepness. And the end...this end is just amazing. Those last words leave you with a chill running down your body, really.
There is something, among all this amazing things, that I didn't like, though: the relationship between Ardeth and Evelyn has a good development, a perfect portait, but I feel them very far one from another, except in the end. I mean, I have nothing against Imhotep (which you portait amazingly) but there is more interaction between the priest and Evelyn than between her and Ardeth. This couple needs here more...soft points, more touch, I don't know how to explain myself, excuse me.
Anyway, I still feel blessed with this story. Really, reading some others I leave them even before I end the first chapter, so obviously and predictable are...
One thing: why don't you writte a sequel?¿ If it's comes good as this one then, please, release your mind and hands and give us some fresh water in this utterly boring desert of predictable plots.

Take care and think about it, I pray.

H.
the-crimson-corvid chapter 35 . 1/25/2012
I'm so torn...this story is fantastic! It's well-written and it makes me feel like I'm really there with the characters. On the other hand...I feel so sorry for everyone in the story! Especially Imhotep...the way you portray him is both heart-breaking and amazing. He (aside from Ardeth) is probably my favorite character ever (emphasis on the "ever")! I really like the compassion and humanity you portray him with. You've really made me pity him. I really, really, really hope that Imhotep gets redeemed and gets a happy ending and that Evy/Nefertiri might forgive him someday (and vice versa) I look forward to the day you decide to continue this.

:-)

~Charis
Miravisu chapter 35 . 5/25/2010
*ticklesspanks the wicked author*

Now that was quite the ending, a ruse, a delight, a torment.

*grins and applauds*
Conic Disconnect chapter 35 . 9/16/2009
WAIT, what, you mean that's it? NO! I refuse! I demand you write more! I demand there be an epic end, and epic battle! I'll... I'll eat you if you don't! Yeah...so...there...

I could have swore I reviewed this way back when, but I guess I didn't. I don't know WHAT I was thinking. But, I love it. I love Immy's inner struggles, Love Ardeth Bay and Evy, love it all. LOVE how tense it is. Well, off to see if you have my sequel up. Tah!
Kitty Snickers chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
awesome story!
Blue-Starlight92 chapter 35 . 4/18/2009
Wow...that was...amazing. I LOVED it!

You do a really good job writing Imhotep, seriously, I loved how you wrote him.

And I liked that it didn't really have a happy ending. I don't know why...but I did.
Blue-Starlight92 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I am definetly interested! I'll have to finish reading this later- but trust me, I will!
Anais chapter 35 . 10/28/2007
I loved this please tell me there is a sequel I need to know what happens, this is honestly one of the best fics out there as are ur other works I especially like Fury and Passion. Keep up the amazing work
loves-winged-dark-angel chapter 35 . 3/8/2007
dude, please keep it up.
bdpotato chapter 3 . 1/24/2006
u are a great writer...i imagine the writers of the Mummy movies couldn't have done a better job...best of luck w/what i hope is a blossoming writing career...if ur not already an author, start! wow, thats the only thing that comes to mind when reading ur fic. Sincerely ur not so subtle fan lol
Marchioness of Blackadder chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Oh nice beginning. I shall review more as I read...
Gemini15 chapter 35 . 9/30/2005
I have just read all of you stroy; a masterpiece. You written how all readers would like to read in a story, your setting was the best, it made out the best of the plot for it to be more dramatic and all. I hope that you update your other chapters. PLEASE.

-Dixie
AquiliusDivine chapter 2 . 4/7/2005
is there... maybe an ardeth/evy tale here? keeps getting better. I'm a bit tight for time at the moment but I will keep up with reading your story.

AD
AquiliusDivine chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Wow... great beginning. I'm gonna keep reading now...
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