Reviews for Akame Ga Kill: Kill The Boyfriend! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() looks like tasumi isn't the only man that's getting dominated lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanna say I hate how u portray akame she isn't sakura who always yelling and ordering people.. |
![]() ![]() God damn only thing that Tatsumi and esdeath are doing is having sex. |
![]() ![]() FUCK YOU CHELSEA! FUCK YOOOUUU! |
![]() ![]() Luv the fanfic but im not a fan of Lubbock X Najenda but besides that amzaing |
![]() ![]() So he completely betrays night raid after having sex a couple times... This is honestly just pathetic...Guess it isn't surprising considering you're fond of Hinata's pathetic character. |
![]() ![]() I honistly thoght this was a nother chapter and was hopeing it was and i am hopeing for another so i hope there will be more |
![]() ![]() This is the best tatsumi x esdeath fanfic ive seen so far just one question will there be more? |
![]() ![]() This was...meh. He goes through all of that shit with Night Raid and then kills two of his comrades just to stay with Esdeath? Like tf? I understand he's trying to change the Empire from the inside but c'mon, this ain't Tatsumi, it just feels like you made your own shitty oc with Tatsumi's powers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus,why everyone but Wave? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tatsumi is Alpharius confirmed. |
![]() ![]() It Was Nice Not just Lemon Lemon Lemon A Good Story But i have a Few Things wrong with it Some of the Grammar was off at Points and Esdeath/Esdese is a little to to Hard on Him If you Watched the Anime(Duh you have) She Looks like She never hurt him so a little to hard on Tatsumi But the Best One i've seen 9/10 ( this Might Change by Later Chapters ) If You Like To Contact Me For Me To Review A Different Project of your or a Good Project You Think is Good Discord:Weeaboo#7692 /Lemon_Reviewer Has to be in English and so is the Anime Good Day To You :) -Lemon/Fanfic "porn" Reviewer |
![]() ![]() More details plz |
![]() ![]() This fanfiction is absolutely amazing! You portrayed the characters very well and accurately. This is something I wish was in the actual show. I feel like the pacing in certain areas could have possibly been better (very minor). The transitions between the characters’ emotions need to have a natural type of flow (if that makes sense). All in all, this story was fantastic. You did a good job on it. Keep it up! |