If Naruto ever absorbed Gai he could just summon him and have him use the Gate of death to get near Juubidara level. Then when he dies he can just reabsorb him and do it again and repeat, pretty crazy

The summon ability is cooler than the absorption in my opinion. Just being able to summon a bunch of ninja like pokemon is kinda funny and scary

That absorption thing is pretty cool. I think I've seen something similar in a comic before, probably X-Men, seems right up a marvel characters alley

PLEASE UPDATE ITS BEEN 4 YEARS

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"My tone changed", so this is some brain dead self insert you couldn't tag correctly, or finish? How hard is life being so fucking brain dead? Genuine question.

Why post if you're so fucking brain dead you can't finish? Also, this is a past tense story, that means "would", not "will", you brain dead monkey fucking retard.

its gooooood

"Naruto, you need to understand that you're killing people! Innocents! For your own gain!"

Hold up, how the fuck is Naruto going to be punished for acting like a ninja?

Like holy shit, I love how fanfiction writes ninja being trained when they're like children to be soldiers and die and kill for their hidden villages, for their militaries, yet here is Hiruzen, the leader of a hidden village that employs child soldiers and he's getting angry Naruto is killing people?

If it was people from Konoha, sure, I'll get that but these are enemy ninja from other ninja villages. They even signed a waver where they are aware they could die/be killed in the exam and yet here Naruto is being punished for killing rival competitors?

Holy shit, what is this writing?

This makes Hiruzen look like a naive idiot who has no idea how the ninja world works.

damn is this a different take to the ball test! Bravo.

Disliked looks like Naruto is going to be a demented beast that will absorb anyone with a useful skill at the first opportunity doesn't seem like there will be romance, I don't see anyone getting to like Naruto with such a disturbing skill except maybe Kaguya

I always wanted a fanfic with a focus on an important descendant of hamura, with some evolution in byakugan that's why I loved the tenseigan and the variant of byakugan the jogan

ok what is this bullshit first he is badass and dont give a fuck and now Naruto is a fucking pussy and a beta bitch so fuck this fick

Yes

The problem of this story is quite apparent. Naruto is too powerful and too gung-ho. The assimilation of other genins in the Chunin Exam was a ridiculously retarded idea.