Reviews for While We Were Sleeping
buffycorvin chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
love it
angel chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Hey! I just want to tell you that this is soo dramatic and interesting. So keep on going with you story!
gunman chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Oh, JEEZ!

You have to finish this!

Granted it's a long story, but come on!

You finally got Keith and Allura to admit their feelings, and she ends up getting kidnapped by Lotor and his bunch.

You have to have this finish with a happy ending!

And King Alfor gave his blessing? Wow. Talk about help from beyond the grave!

Please finish the story!
momiji-k chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Ok, here it is.

First of all the story was perfect up until the point that Lotor walked in. Not to say that it got bad after that. It was still quite good, just Lotor ruined the perfect fantasy. :(

I don't mind the script format too much but it would be neat to see this story fleshed out in a normal story format. But your script style was well done in the fact that you labeled all the speaking parts and keeped things well spaced.

Most people try to run everything together and then you have no idea what's going on as you try to read.

I'm quite sad that this story was never finished. This is a VERY old posting so I am sure it never will be finished. I guess I will have to write my own conclusion.

Miraculously the team manages to rescue the princess from Lotor. He has not yet had the chance to violate her (though he knocked her around a little bit). Back on Arus those with injuries recover. Keith and the Princess get married and they all live happily ever after. The end.

Not very characteristic of one of my stories but the best I could do in just one paragraph. :P
Exoticbellydancer chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
It's very good I like it alot, please make another chapter!
Sea-EnigmaDare chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Hi there,

I really enjoyed the story. Is there going to be a sequel or second chapter? Well if there isn't, I think you should have one as I see on some reviews that some are waiting for one.

Keep up the good work and all the best to you :).
Mary chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Sequel! Sequel! I want a Sequel!

Great story...and if you haven't figured it out yet or not, but...

I WANT A SEQUEL!
Lady Lydia chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
uh ho

Hope Allura doesn't get raped... :-S

But this is good...write mroe please!
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Very good so far, I need another chapter soon, want to know what hapens next, want to... well you get the point.
Dee chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Great story ...update soon...
ME chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
CONTINUE PLEASE!
Erinn chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
awww! You had a higher rating of this earlier?

Too bad I didn't see it.

Oh, well.

Good job.

-Erinn
Erinn chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
awww! You had a higher rating of this earlier?

Too bad I didn't see it.

Oh, well.

Good job.

-Erinn
Lady CyberDragon chapter 1 . 11/18/2002
Hey Karen!

Great fic! Although I am a little disappointed about the NC-17 fics being hacked. There are some good ones that are not another porn flick and this was one of them! Very lovely imagery, good storyline (although IMO K/A is overused!) but otherwise a great fic!

-LCD

PS- Please check out my newest fic "Desert Rain" in the rated R section!