Reviews for Kitsune of Las Noches
sumantha chapter 14 . 10/6/2020
It's an interesting way you've merged Kurama and the zanpakuto, looking forward to seeing Naruto start using more of his powers.
prbenjamin chapter 28 . 9/30/2020
Bro. This wait is longer than my penis. I am really shocked and sad :( Can you please update papa. I don't want to call Shaggy-sama on you!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/24/2020
They are all SUPPOSED to be in the "land of fire" right? So how in the heck is there ALWAYS a lake, or river around when kisame fights? It doesn't make any sense. At a certain point, it really strains "suspension of disbelief".
Guest chapter 19 . 9/24/2020
Three chapters for one fight? Doesn't that seem a BIT excessive?In comparison to the arrancar the akutski just AREN'T that dangerous.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/24/2020
No actually it wasn't the "masked man"... Konoha WAS IN ON THE didn't order it "per say" but danzo did. And sarutobi CONDONED IT. That's why no anbu came near the compound. (That's CANON). As far as canon is concerned obitedo showed up in konoha ONCE and ONLY once. To release the kyuubi... EVERYTHING else was back-biting and in-fighting in the village. (doesn't make the uchiha out too good does it?.. Also really makes you wonder why they were left around so long)
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
This shouldn't even be a fight... It should be hinata doing ONE HAND SEAL and the match is over with negji rolling around on the ground screaming! For an idiot that believes in "fate" he sure has a lot of it against him!

As far as sasUKE wanting naruto to train him, he should just say NO... and when asked "how are you so strong"?... answer... "GENETICS DUMBASS".
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
So again, how does hinata lose this fight? Shouldn't it be a "gimme" fight if she's not a mouse and would have the backbone to use the seal?
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
I never understood something.. Why doesn't hinata (or naruto for that matter) just use the curse seal on negji? It's like one hand-sign... and it would drop him in mid-"rush".. toward her... Plus it kinda BLOWS AWAY his whole "fate" shtick... I honestly think the entire exams are a WASTE OF TIME. (it could be better used... Send naruto to waterfall, where he meets Fuu.. Send him to The land of claw or fangs where he actually meets a girlfriend for kiba!)..The ONLY part of the chunin exams that need hiim, is the GARAA fight, and that's just because of the old toad's LAZINESS. Other then that it was pointless... Orochi and the the third fight on a roof? REALLY? NOBODY thought to collapse it? (THOUSANDS of anbu there, but NOBODY thought of this?)
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
Shouldn't it be naruto "uzumaki-namizkaze" in the match with kiba? He did reveal it to everyone LAST CHAPTER... So this doesn't make sense. (or did you forget that.. to make it canon?)
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
So I gotta ask.. What was the point of putting naruto with team 7? What was the point of putting him in the exams? Kakashi has taught them NOTHING AT ALL in this one (shouldn't someone have complained about this?) and NARUTO was the one that brought out sasUKE's sharringan (why? Is of course up for debate).. As a teacher kakashi has UTTERLY failed! Is there ANY story where he's at least COMPETENT?
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
Why would konoha allow the deranged jinchuriki to fight in the exams? That doesn't make any sense... The collateral damage alone would suggest that HE should be the one taken out of them FIRST! (yes naruto can kick his ass..easily... But the sheer amount of destruction caused by them going at it, is unacceptable!) It really makes NO SENSE AT ALL for those three to still be allowed in. (very poorly written here, sometimes canon just DOESN'T WORK).
Guest chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
"you don't have to be down on yourself"... How do you figure? He's been tracking Orochimaru? Yet he didn't know about oto OR that orochi had killed the kazekage, OR that he was invading the village... YEAH GREAT JOB THERE... The akutski? He JUST found out about them, doesn't know who they are, how many there is, what their plan is, OR where their located(which is kinda GLARINGLY OBVIOUS)... So basically he SUCKS at his job! And ALL that (non) information took him 13 YEARS to get!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
I'm not sure on the logic but WIND beats lightning right? (you'd think wind would beat fire 'if you ever blew out birthday candles' not lightning)..
Guest chapter 13 . 9/22/2020
HAHAHA temari vs. sasuke? He's a "done duck" you know that right?.. WIND BEATS LIGHTNING...
Guest chapter 13 . 9/22/2020
I fail to see how ANY of these "secrets" help anyone... with sasuke.. "your family planned a coupe and danzo and the hokage forced your brother to kill them all... HAPPY TO KNOW IT?"... Regardless of when or HOW he knows this, isn't going to change anything... Naruto's heritage? I don't see how adding years on to his age changes this at all either! (in fact that should make him MORE bitter toward konoha).
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