Reviews for Kitsune of Las Noches
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
How did orochi put "four very complex and very powerful seals" on his scrolls? HE SUCKED AT SEALING REMEMBER? PLUS it's a dead art... NOBODY could have put them on them! So NOW they don't want to incur his wrath, but LAST time they heard he was the son of the fourth and had the kyuubi under control... But that somehow didn't what? REGISTER? (also weren't the shinobi council going to start pushing them around too?) These guys are dumb bad-guys to keep coming back too.. You can only really use them ONCE and then they are pretty much exhausted as far as believably...
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
I never understood why the characters in naruto actually EXPLAIN their techniques and/or how they got them, TO THE PEOPLE THEY ARE USING THEM ON... Isn't that REALLY, REALLY stupid? "yes here is how the power works exactly"... The biggest fear for a ninja (more then death itself) is the UNKNOWN. So basically if the enemy doesn't know what you can do OR how you can do it?... They are less likely to attack! (besides what would it matter?.. Nobody else can learn the ways naruto does stuff.. So it would be an exercise in futility)
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
I "will never understand why naruto acts afraid of someone like garaa"... That's paraphrasing the story.. Nine CRUSHES one! I mean ANNIHILATES it... Not Twice as powerful as garaa... 8 TIMES STRONGER!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
All in all the "edo" doesn't WORK for this series, logistically, it's embarrassing that's it's canon.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
The fight with rain is TERRIBLE, they can't come to the sudden "realization" that their all illusions TWICE in a fight, that's MORONIC. You had them know they were illusions... At the start ( Which at this point other than naruto, NOBODY can use SOLID clones...So they should kinda know that... Then you make them realize it's an illusion 3 paragraphs after... WHICH THEY ALREADY KNEW). Seriously wtf is wrong with these people?... You make em' dumb... But that's WAY TOO DUMB.

Actually there is a LOT of "holes"... If obitedo wanted rin back? Why didn't he just do the edo?... Seems a lot less convulsed... If nageto wanted Yahimero (or whatever his name was) why didn't he just resurrect him? (he always could have)... The edo makes a LOT of the naruto mythos just go "huh".. It's a REALLY STUPID POWER... Why didn't naruto bring back the entire uzumaki line?... Why didn't sasuke just bring back his family?... Why does anyone fight when they can just be "re-summoned"?
Wolfone10 chapter 13 . 9/23/2020
How did sasUKE advance? He never had the sharringan and he never copied lee's moves... So basically he was PATHETIC in these exams... Past round 1 he never should have made it.. (how did he copy the answers if he DIDN'T HAVE THE SHARRINGAN?) Point 2... He never fought lee, so he never saw lee's moves, ergo... He couldn't have used them! He'd have got cremated in the prelims (he's just not strong enough, without stealing something).
Guest chapter 8 . 9/19/2020
Wait if naruto already saw that haku wasn't aiming for anything vital in the human body... What was the sense of "saving sasuke"? He was never in any "real" danger... He should have just let him be "killed".
Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2020
Sakura refused to acknowledge that naruto was stronger... You realize even in CANON (the fangirl canon we all hate) she at least was bright enough to acknowledge that! I'm not sure the people of konoha need your HELP in being STUPID (they seem that down to a science... So please don't make them DUMBER then they have to be! It's already mind-boggling how they are considered powerful, or how ANY of them get up and get dressed in the morning alone without causing serious injury to themselves!)
Guest chapter 6 . 9/16/2020
Sakura refused to acknowledge that naruto was stronger... You realize even in CANON (the fangirl canon we all hate) she at least was bright enough to acknowledge that! I'm not sure the people of konoha need your HELP in being STUPID (they seem that down to a science... So please don't make them DUMBER then they have to be! It's already mind-boggling how they are considered powerful, or how ANY of them get up and get dressed in the morning alone without causing serious injury to themselves!)
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2020
Actually, SAKURA of all people, raises a good point... How did the bridge builder even GET to konoha if gato knew of his plans? (that particular question is never addressed in canon) You kinda "hand-waved" it away here, but it's a valid point... Wouldn't it have been smarter and more cost effective for gato just to make sure nobody from wave could make it to a hidden village? (also how did konoha NOT know about gato? Isn't the old toad SUPPOSED to be running a "spy network"... and wouldn't ALL traffic this close to konoha being controlled by ONE corrupt idiot KINDA be something they should already be aware of?) LOADS OF PLOT HOLES... Canon has more of them then Swiss Cheese! (any attempt to follow canon, just makes your story "bullet-riddled". Team 7 is NOT balanced in this one, it's NOT EVEN CLOSE, the other teams are not balanced either (but they never were)... In this story, EVERYONE with even ONE functioning brain-cell knows team 7 is a BAD IDEA... It leads one to wonder if the people of konoha are really THAT "self-destructive"? OR why the author just can't seem to pull away from canon. Or has the hokage's brain finally turned into age-old-rot goo? (him and danzo and koheru and horinma are getting close... You can tell by their actions and decision making...
Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2020
Team 7 as it is in canon just LAZY AUTHOR!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2020
Okay, not being biased at all here, just the facts.. but the teams are put together to allow them not to be "unbalanced" and the group as a whole isn't?.. SO why would naruto and sasuke be put on the same team? Doesn't that kinda fly in the face of EVERYTHING that has been established?
Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2020
How does team "suicide" make any sense?.. Number one, naruto isn't "dead last".. Number 2. They've already shown clear disliking of each other... Number 3.. It COMPLETELY unbalnces all the teams... Number 4. t flies in the face of the tradition you seem to make the fossils want to uphold...

NOPE DONE WITH THIS STORY.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2020
Why would naruto possibly go back to his old RAT HOLE of an apartment after living in a palace? Shouldn't he just move into the namikaze/uzumaki estate and not GIVE A CRAP if anyone didn't like that, from the jump? To hell with "needing" the senile, spinless hokage! Shouldn't naruto have ALREADY met his parents? Considering he was in hecto mundo..ESSENTIALLY the "afterlife"... So shouldn't he ALREADY KNOW who he was? (YEARS AGO).
Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2020
I never understood these "naruto understood hinata's feelings early" stories..If they aren't on the same team, then there really isn't any opening for them to explore it, without a lot of OTHER drama... So what's the point? Either it ends up in a civil war (which is kinda obviously brewing) OR they barely talk to one another?.. So, yeah, kinda pointless... Or put them on the same team?.. And you've got HIM teaching the majority of the time (which is kinda backwards) or they are all REALLY under-powered in comparison. (yet in all these stories... Haku just suddenly "appears".. with ABSOLUTELY no "formal" ninja "training".. and gets chunin off the bat?.. So why not just start naruto at chunin?.. To do otherwise with anyone else and not him, MAKES NO SENSE)...

How exactly is naruto 'dead last' in this one? He's never been in school? The term ONLY applies to stories where he's ACTUALLY been there! It doesn't make any sense in this one!
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