I totally wonder how this canon would react to the spirit of Erich Kästner, his "das doppelte Lottchen" being something like the ur-canon... I really enjoy your work.

this is the best parodious fanfiction I have ever seen! If you would bequeath upon me the right to create my own PPC agent and send them into a few MS stories, I will...probably not let you down.

And if she ends up Suish, feel free to stab, shoot, maul, electrocute, disintegrate, or do anything else to her.

You certainly were right about this not being a mission you need to know the canon for. I think I've seen the books, but that's the extent of my experience. This was pretty amusing! It's one of those missions where you don't have to necessarily read all the stories featuring the agents to get. (I remember there was some discussion of that on the Board a while back.)

As far as concrit, aside from a couple of slightly confusing parts I haven't got much. (Not so confusing that I think they actually need editingI more or less picked it up and I get the feeling that I'd get it if I actually had read everything with these agents, which isn't a bad thing.) I appreciated the comic scene skip. I particularly liked the way it subtly commented on the fanfic by skipping the "boring" bits like the fanfic didn't. A good read!

~Snowy the Sane Fangirl

I liked this mission overall.

The two things that jumped out at me the most were Selene needing to remind Katlyn to stop cuddling the POVs and get to missioning and the ending with the storytelling. In general, you've got a funny agent team here.

I would like to know what the A-word was, since it was completely nonobvious from context.

Summarizing over what would probably have been a rather boring mission is a reasonable decision. One complaint I have because of that, though, is that your criticism at the end of the relationships being unjustified didn't really come through in the mission itself, and, since it sounds like that's one of the major issues with the fic (the other one being that it's boring), it seems like it should have been mentioned in-character.

- Tomash

(I should have a reviewable piece of writing up Soon (tm), so don't worry about looking for something of mine to comment on right away)

Ix here. Always a joy to see Selene and Kaitlyn back in action. I absolutely loved all the fluffy povs running around—and now we have an entire herd of them in the courtyard!

I guess my only complaint about this is that I didn't really get much of a sense as to why the fic was bad. Rushed relationship, vaguely defined settings, and lots of povs? It felt kind of glossed over and I was left wondering why this one specifically needed to be missioned instead of being left alone.

Otherwise, this was very fun to read, and I look forward to the next.

The badfic was more like mediocrefic, really, just lacking a spark to make it an engaging read. The gentle exorcism was fitting that way. Normally I'd wonder why choose this fic to single out for the PPC treatment, since there are a lot worse, but your criticism at the end makes it more understandable. Less mockery, more constructive criticism.

Very good PPCs so far, and I particularly like the idea of leaving some constructive criticism for the authors just in case they are willing to improve.

Another brilliant chapter. I love the idea of them having to watch the DVD instead... it makes a lot of sense.
Kaitlyn freaking out over the hobbits was brilliant. And then... no hobbit. :-D

Kaitlyn's Patronus is a hedgehog?
...no, I can see that.
This chapter was brilliant and possibly my favorite to date. Selene is turning out to be quite the rational one.

I am so glad there are others who dislike Mary Sues and read Protectors of the Plot Continuum. I love you're writing style and the way your characters interact with each other. Please write more stories. I'm working on a story similar to PPC. I'd be great if we can PM each other.

I loved this, and the way you did it!
I wouldn't have the first clue how to go about writing this sort of thing. The Minis are seriously adorable, in a dysfunctional type of way. The 'Pack' trailing behind them is clever, and the little bit at the end too.
All in all, an excellent mission. Looking forwards to more!

-Kitty

Excellent... I do hope that this is not removed by admins like TOS was. Nice to have a bit of character development with Selene. -November14.

This is funny! I hate badfics and this totally makes them worth it! I hav axually red both of the fics mentiond in here lol :) ther pretty bad

Great job with this!
I always liked Jay and Acacia's original style of barely quoting the badfic at all. You've written this perfectly.
The little bit in the middle about the Suvian/author indulging in fantasies COULD be taken as slight abuse. Maybe steer away from those bits.
All in all, an excellent mission! Looking forwards to more PPC: Driftwood in future!

Kitty

I am afraid I do not like this. It is cruel, and leaves a bitter taste. By all means attack a concept, but a specific attack on one person's work like this is bullying. I should perhaps mention that I know nothing of the fic or author in question and have not read it, but I was horrified to realise that the target of your attack was real. It is not funny.