Reviews for Black Sky
Rose1414 chapter 295 . 9/21
It took me four days to re-read this again but is was very much worth it. What a brilliant story you have written!
Guest chapter 295 . 9/16
Me encanta tu historia por favor actualiza pronto
huskielover94 chapter 295 . 9/16
This story is wonderful.. I love it.. this pairing has also become one of my favorites and I am sad there are so few of it.. can’t wait to see what’s next
timisnotmyname chapter 231 . 9/15
The idea of a three year old basically bullying an heir of the Superbi Family into a binding magical contract is hilarious lmao
SeleneAlice chapter 295 . 9/14
Please update this story soon..Please!
annastasiablack chapter 1 . 9/13
I must say that I am in awe of this fic
it had made me a die hard fan of khr ..
timisnotmyname chapter 151 . 9/10
I’m loving the story, but if I could make a suggestion- it would be nice to have a resource somewhere that lists all of the members of Dorea’s guardians and their codenames. It takes me way too long to remember to whom each codename corresponds; if I had a page I could flip to to check when I forgot that would be awesome.

Anyway, thanks again for this great read! It’s amazing and I’m awed you found the time to commit to such a detailed and well fleshed out story. Kudos!
Guest chapter 295 . 9/9
Can you continue this story? I love it.
timisnotmyname chapter 143 . 9/8
God that was satisfying.
timisnotmyname chapter 140 . 9/8
Finally back! Gotta say, as much as I adore Maínomai (and I ADORE Maínomai), it was kind of a drag to have to take a long (161 thousand word long) break from this story to read a companion piece just to know what’s happening. That said, I’ve done so; I’m so engrossed by this work I really had no other option lol. I can’t wait to read the rest! Thanks again for sharing this monster story! It’s awesome!
Ralyx chapter 295 . 9/7
What a wonderfully crafted and detailed story! I eagerly await the next chapter!

My only major point of contention is the whole situation surrounding Death. I have a hard time taking stories seriously if they actually try to anthropomorphize demise, because it always raises unnecessarily awkward questions regarding the supposed mechanics and motivations of a concept. For instance, is death reliant on Death, or perhaps vice versa? Why enlist mortal help, if he's been doing fine anyway? How does he plan on enforcing 'duties'? If he can enforce them, why not act on his targets himself? Why does he care about people prolonging their life to begin with? Does it annoy him? If so, why should anyone else care? In a story with such incredible detail and thought put into crafting consistent character motivations, Death just seemingly sticks out like a sore thumb and proclaims "I AM HERE TO BE AN UNAVOIDABLE PLOT CONTRIVANCE!"

Then there's the issue of how Dorea hardly seems to be bound or compelled to execute her 'duties' as Lady Death in the first place - or else she'd have already killed Talbot and his wife - making everything appear to be even more pointless...
Mari Wollsch chapter 20 . 9/5
when will you continua? please update soon and much xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Guest chapter 295 . 9/3
I just finished reading what you've written so far. 295 chapters, 1200000 words, in nine days was a lot even for me but, I had so much trouble even stopping for work, that it was well worth missing some sleep to continue reading. I can't wait to see where else you go with the story, as I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. Hope you update soon. Sarah
timisnotmyname chapter 1 . 8/31
I’m excited to start this. Terrible timing tho- just started my new semester and my new job starts tomorrow. I can already tell this is gonna burn up all of my free time I should be spending studying. Oh well; worth it for a good read! I can’t wait!
CaBuckeye chapter 155 . 8/28
Troubleshooter's cat? I thought that Lawyer had the ginger cat with the mushed in face...
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