Reviews for Black Sky |
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![]() ![]() Moelle: marrow (bone marrow) French c #338 |
![]() ![]() My second point came back to me as I was reading chapter 309: Nono may mean ninth but it also means idiot in French... Fits nicely for that dimwit! :) |
![]() ![]() hi! Just finished reading chapter 307 and taking a break to write to you. I find the story HILARIOUS and plan on reading to the last chapter (currently 341, hoping for more before I reach it... Hint!) As for other issues... You use flare (which is a bright light produced by the sun, a nuclear explosion, or a violent chemical reaction) when you want to say flair (to have the nose for, like the dog's flair, the flair of a detective, etc); a typical saying is that even if money has no odor it takes flair to collect it. I had another point, but Al Zeimer is part of my family line so... Maybe next time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've not been on for a while so it was a really nice surprise when I finally did and I found out that Black sky now has 341 chapters! My last reread I did ended on 305 so I'm looking forward to reading the new chapters though it might take a while to get there! I absolutely adore this fic! Thank you (and your beta reader)so much for writing it and continuing all these years! |
![]() ![]() Too bad Marius did not answer his dad's question about what time it was by "Relative to what?" with an inspired look as if he was thinking in Einsteinian relativistic terms. It would have been hilarious. |
![]() ![]() I’m all for the idea of Tracy and the Bronco going on a date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is so FASCINATING to read, how almost reasonable Nono seems from his perspective, and how wildly out of touch with anything that perspective is. Something that especially hit me was ‘shattering [Tsuna’s] naïve confidence in the goodness of humanity’ which has Absolutely no basis in fact and he has no grounds for believing. I don’t know why THAT absurdity hit harder than Every Other belief Nono has about every other person he knows about. Maybe because his other views are twisted from actual interaction he’s had, while he can just make up a personality for Tsuna while cloth so it comes across even more out of touch. |
![]() ![]() Pretty out of character for Dorea to just sit around while her husband is frozen. Makes no sense considering it’s been two years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() ‘Enrico got himself shot’ Squalo you did that. You meticulously planned that. Like I understand why you are not telling him that you murdered his brother, but you are very much the one who Did That. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First appearance of Maínomai! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, I'm so happy you updated because this story is awesome and I love it~! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() This chapter is STILL so good every time I read it 3 Absolute awesomeness and an amazing plot twist! |
![]() ![]() do you ever plan to cross post this on ao3 one day? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Squee! More new chapters! So fantastic. As always I love all of the depth and detail that you effortlessly provide (I am quite sure that it takes lots of work in your end, but it is so delightfully easy to read). Thank you so very much. |