Reviews for Black Sky |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope she torments the fuck out of dumbles when she gets to hogwarts! |
![]() ![]() I loved it! Can't wait to see how the mafia relates! Also rebornxdorea all the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see no errors this time. Still Arcturus is an awesome grandpa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea, it has a lot of promise, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting start! Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor James and his crappy decision making skills. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this plot base . Judging from the title, Dorea/Rose is going to be a Sky Guardian? |
![]() ![]() ![]() My interest is peaked...tell me more! I look forward to the next chapter! Your Inuyasha fanfiction was always great so I'm sure that this will be just as fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're missing part of a sentence after you mentioned that Remus' werewolf status fixed him. It currently goes, 'all bound to have taken some damage, which made James Even third year would...' Then there's a misspelling when you've mentioned the potion, as you have 'neithr man had the genius to invent it.' Other than that, first review is mine! Onward story! |