Reviews for Black Sky |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You know how The British royal family has a wide-ranging influence on society and culture, like the Christmas tree , white wedding dresses and commercial morning cult. Wont Zabini's royal family has a wide-ranging influence on society ,culture, and fashion. Because I see people moving near where the Royal family live. Thank you for your time writing this story and looking forward to more chapters. thank you |
![]() ![]() I could actually see the reformed ministry using the MiB as a cover for their obliviation teams- Hide wand inside sleeve Raise prop "neuralyser" Put on sunglasses Press button on "neuralyser" (really just a camera flash) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't want to be that person but... Poison A toxin that enters the body through the skin, mouth, or nose. Poisonous animals may coat their bodies in a toxic substance, or they may gain their poison by eating toxic prey. For example, poison ivy is poisonous if you touch it. Venom A toxin that enters the body through a wound, such as a bite, sting, or scratch. Venomous animals often have specialized body parts, like fangs, spines, or stingers, that allow them to inject venom into their victim. For example, a cobra uses its fangs to inject venom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story and can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the last decade you have written 343 chapters. That's about 34 chapters a year and almost 3 chapters a month. I haven't heard of anyone else who has managed that. You are beyond amazing. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, realizing that as a medically minded sun assassin, who is a hand to hand fighter with an extremely dynamic personality, Leo is Rhea's equivalent to Luss, and now I kinda want to see the two interact. I just think it would be fun to see, right up there with Luna and Mainomai having a mist competition... although now that I'm in the headspace I realize those two are also reflections on the Black/Varia mirror being terrifying capable Mists operating through what other perceive as a handicap, doting parents, being unfathomably nice despite how madness inducing they are, and not really needing a weapon to wreck your whole day. I don't know if this symmetry was a deliberate choice on your point, but it's a wonderful detail that makes the whole thing worth a reread. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wassup, Having read your absorbing Story, Black Sky, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. If you're messaging me on Discord, please also check my Twitter and Instagram, where I've uploaded my work. You can contact me on Discord, Twitter, and Instagram as well. Here is my Contacts discord : naedinefebruary Twitter : naedinefebruary Instagram: naedinefebruary Hope to hear back from you soon. |
![]() ![]() Everytime i read this story, the interaction between rence and the vongola is one of my most favorites |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha.. Xanxus escapes his mistakes by flirting with his wife and calling her "Best Wife"... even though he is mature ..he is still teen at heart... teens are best flirts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love this story line 3 time to reading it i hav also look for more hitman style storys . |
![]() ![]() I've VASTLY enjoyed rereading this over the past 2ish weeks. I had a craving for your writing and characters after rereading something over on AO3 and after rereading what you had there menderes my way back over here. Work had been extra intense the past couple weeks but having this to munch on has been incredibly satisfying and how it's broken up both within story and the side stories has helped immensely. This is the third time I'm rereading this if I'm remembering right and each time I pick up a little something different. Some things have been stuck in my head for YEARS and others I've had the joy of reremembering. Thank ypu for continuing on with this after so very, very long and creating and bringing to life a complex and varied orchestra of a cast. The blend between cultures is amazing and vivid, the character interactions feel real, and lore and details make me want to weep. I can't wait for the next few weeks in universe to go down as there's so much stuff hinted at being resolved and new things/characters/situations to be introduced and I'm just plain anticipating getting to read more new writing. I think since my last reread only about 10 chapters have come out (not meaning this in ANY way, shape, or form to be taken as castigation.) I clearly remember ending off at the date at the coliseum, but I have no regrets rereading everything just for those few chapters. I anticipate getting to enjoy this again in another few years when possibly more has come out and if not, then just to see what else I can pick up and gain out of re-enjoying it again. Thank you for writing! 333 |
![]() ![]() ![]() cat got out smarted by a three year old |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful i love it when this updates it is one of my favorite fics |