The guy below me gives off,I'm not gay, you're gay! in fact, I've had sex with millions of women!" vibes lol.

okay, this is too much for me.
in general, this is not badly written, but the characters are too perfect, too logic. everyone reacts logically, except for when you need an enemy, like Narcisa, or the drunk guy, or Tracey's boyfriend.
and lastly, and more importantly: heterosexual guys don't analyze other relationships like that, don't intrude like that in relationships with other people that they don't yet know. the "I know his type" was such a girly thing to say it threw me off. Sorry, but you're characterization of Harry doesn't fit. Either he's a direct, no nonsense guy, with almost no experience with women, or he's a sensitive, relationship expert, with almost always a perfect thing to say. And, no, ignoring the other person is not something a guy would intrude on a friend of a friend's relationship.

Also, why the sudden desexualization of HP? He's not a virgin, nor a teenager, Daphne is hot, he's hot, what's the deal with both characters not addressing that?

I'm going out on a limb, but this reads as the work of a female teenager. That's not a compliment.

Again, this is not that bad in general, I'm sure some people will like it, but as an adult, het male this is definitely not for me

Enjoyable story, realistic in the evolution of people.

Loved it - Brilliantly written and throughly enjoyed!

Really glad I gave this a read. The relationships are very real and human, it plays to the society the stories built without going overboard like so many do. The conflict was deserved and well written and the characters were very grounded within the story. Sorry that you seem to be getting so much hate in reviews about Ginny or the time turner incident.

On Ginny her characterization here seems good, obviously there is so little to go on from canon but you definitely grasped the issues of a post-war relationship well in my opinion. So many just want to hate on her via reviews and she obviously did make severa mistakes but at the end of the day they were very human mistakes. A lot of people seem to be taking the characters talking about Harry's part in their collapse as some kind of victim blaming when it just isn't. I was especially happy with the resolution of them just... never really resolving the drama between them; its painful and sad but so very real. Sometimes we just have to accept that the pain isnt worth the resolution and move on.

The time turner incident was also well done IMO. The way it impacted Daphne emotionally and Ron's response were both well done. So many people are mad at it being a "risky" choice but it fit the characters and ages well.

I can't with this story. It's so fucking dumb. I'm out.

You know this is one of the most retarded things I've heard in all of the dozens of fanfictions I've read before.
We need to test this very dangerous piece of magic, who do we choose? How about the lord of two big houses in your society and one of the most important people alive?
? what ?

Honestly Ginny is trash. The bitch is a whore and clearly cares nothing for Harry or about him. She doesn't even seem the least bit sorry. If anything she's acting like she's the victim in all of this. It's ridiculous.

Doesn't/didn't he have a set from the Yule Ball?

Thought it was more of Days to come! :(

Well at least he didn't step into the Quantum anything machine first.

"I'd like to Mister Davis, please."

kinky

Its a great introduction

But Harry needs to make a move, even if it hurts. Been there

just rereading your excellent story. I love it you have created a great world and spin a brilliant story.

One question though with the test on the rabbit. Is a transfigured rabbit actually an animal i.e. alive and hence a suitable test subject or is it still actually the ink pot it was transfigured from.

Shouldn't this test be done with an actual animal test subject

This was a great little read. It’s a shame about the typos and missing words.