| Reviews for Of Citadels And Castles, Book One: Culture Shocks |
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   Kal824 chapter 14 . 12/6/2018 Super excited to see Winter Knight Dresden included in this |
| Aroe007 chapter 14 . 12/6/2018 It's Dresden! |
| Nerfhearder69 chapter 14 . 12/6/2018 For a holiday present, I enjoyed the hell out of it! Keep it coming, please! |
| Architect Ironturtle chapter 14 . 12/6/2018 Dresden! Dresden! Dresden! |
| Faraway-R chapter 13 . 8/24/2017 Love the story, really I do! Also, was half certain that "vicinity of queen-being in a building amid frozen wasteland" would indeed be resonating with Winter Court a bit. Nice red herring! Or is it? |
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 13 . 7/20/2017 cool |
| Dauntes chapter 12 . 7/13/2017 Other than some inconsistencies, like in this chapter Liara seemingly not remembering Castle or their previous Soul Gaze, that are likely attributable to the length of time you've been writing this story, I don't really have any criticisms. At first, I was annoyed you'd write a Dresden crossover without Dresden but the strength of your character has more than won me over. Definitely enjoying the story. Thanks for continuing to write it! |
| Dericof Diname chapter 13 . 7/12/2017 Thanks for the new chapter, I can't wait for the next one, the conversation between the Queen and Machias will be very interesting. Also, I wonder if a wizard has something to help the matriarch against Indoctrination. If a Denarian managed to end at some distant planet. How many other magical threats are out in space? Till next time. |
| RBomber chapter 13 . 7/12/2017 "Query: Does this unit have soul?" |
| coduss chapter 9 . 6/15/2017 so...can you pleeeease tell me the chances of their being romance in this? it doenst HAVE to be a harem, or even a threesome with tali, megani, and Machias, buuuuuut if it were either of those, i wouldnt complain... |
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 5 . 5/9/2017 Soul gazing does not go against the "don't enter another persons mind" rule, as you are not actually viewing their memories or looking at their mind. In this story, that's how you've portrayed it, but that's not how it works in the Dresden Files. The reason you aren't allowed to enter another persons mind is because the smallest suggestion or change causes cascading effects, as seen when Molly tries to help one of her friends after the incident at the Horror Comiccon in one of the earlier books. |
| MattKennedy chapter 12 . 4/14/2017 Very cool story! :) |
| PiotrMc chapter 12 . 3/26/2017 Looooove it another wonderful chapter garrus and tali should end up together like they do in the games if you don't romance them. Sigh garrus and tali better than all the andromeda party members |
| EternalRestOfPerpetualMotion chapter 12 . 3/19/2017 Hot damn, aren't i glad that i stumble upon this magnificent piece of work! Subbed. Keep up the good work and please don't die. |
| Winged Serpent of Light - BOTM chapter 1 . 3/17/2017 Wait... do you mean Marshall, or Warden? |