Reviews for Specimen 1
EmPro8 chapter 19 . 9/18/2017
Good story. The ending was a bit abrupt, but good story nonetheless. I liked Caro. I think a good bonus chapter would be a letter from Leo to Caro, thanking her for her kindness and everything she's done for him. You don't even have to have her reacting to it, a simple letter will suffice.

Aww well. Whether you do so or not, still good story. Kept me interested all day. Good job.
EmPro8 chapter 17 . 9/18/2017
I liked this chapter
EmPro8 chapter 12 . 9/18/2017
I'd think Leo would've drank the water by raising it, not lapping it up like a dog. Sure, he's putting on a dumb animal act but he's still got SOME dignity. Leo is all about honor. But on the other hand, considering his scramble-brained state and being dehydrated, drinking like that is HARD.
EmPro8 chapter 5 . 9/18/2017
Ooh boy. Do you know how utterly exhausting it is to survive on your own like that?
EmPro8 chapter 4 . 9/18/2017
Whoop de doo Leo's alive
EmPro8 chapter 2 . 9/18/2017
TBH my reaction would be closer to Don's. If someone was missing for two years I'd just slowly accept they aren't coming back and also I'd never talk about and overall just avoid the subject and never think about it like at all
DragonChild157 chapter 19 . 7/29/2016
Aww, poor Caro. Calling it now, sooner or later she's going to get invited to New York by the Hamatos family on Ayotl's behalf.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/21/2016
This is a great story.
I love it.
When are you going to update?
FFX2player chapter 19 . 7/18/2016
Now that I've devoured this awesome piece could you update it some time please?
DragonChild157 chapter 19 . 4/16/2016
oh my gosh, just found this and POWERED through it during my fifteen minute lunch break. that sure as hell better not be the end! Ooh, can Caroline like, accidentally transfer to the NYC zoo and maybe remake Ayotl's acquaintance? That would be SO crash!
TheRedScreech chapter 19 . 3/22/2016
Most excellent. A little rushed at the end but very good.
efarraiz chapter 19 . 8/20/2015
ahhhhhhhhhh, genial pero tienes que continuarla quiero saber que paso con Leo y su familia, la condición de leo cuando lo examino donny y la reacción de su familia cuando conto su historia y lo que ellos habían leído.

please continua pronto.
gracias a tí por escribir . eres excepcional.
Siennawoods chapter 19 . 8/18/2015
Love your story which is full of twists and turns! Very original and cannot wait for the next chapter.
TwinKatanaBlades chapter 19 . 8/7/2015
You're not dead!
I'm so happy about the update! The way you write is still as awesome as ever. They finally rescued Leo! Yay! I kinda feel a bit bad for Caro but I guess since she knows (suspects?) that Leo escaped with his family, the blow's lessened. It was nice that she erased their tracks but just a tiny bit of concrit here. Aren't they ninjas? Shouldn't they have thought about leaving tracks? I mean, that would be kinda sloppy for stealthy ninjas. But other than that, IT'S PERFECT! I kinda imagine that Leo won't be able to talk that well as he hasn't used his voice in a while. Am I right? I dunno. It all comes down to you. See ya! :D
ewebster123 chapter 19 . 8/6/2015
Leo's back home! :D And Caroline... I'm hoping she doesn't pursue her interest in those extra footprints, but naturally she probably will and end up mixed up in something unexpected.
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