I loved this story so much! You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing

I'm glad you added this because the last chapter messed me up. Major character death is always hard for me, just like life. It was a great read, thotoughly enjoyed suaveward and Bella. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Really enjoyed this one!

Lovely, lovely. A change from blowing shit up, but I loved it just the same. I hope I can find a few more of your great stories to read…

Ok, I’ve been steadily working through all your wonderful stories since I discovered them a couple of weeks ago. I just loved Rose’s bachelorette party speech. As usual fascinating original plot, great characters, great dialogue, and no idea where you are going to take this story, but I know I’ll love it.

great story, you definitely have a way of writing humor, loved every moment until Chapter 41 where I felt like I hit a brick wall going 80 mph. Your characters were recognizable as Twilight characters but way more fun, still laughing about a couple of scenes. Thanks for writing this.

I love this story. I think this is the third reading tho it may be four.
I love the humour, the funny remarks at the end of each part.
I always love a strong, clever successful Bella. I’ll take Edward anyway!
Thanks for a great read with so many good laughs.

I’m sorry I’m horrible with reviewing. I love your stories, I love this story, I enjoy your writing immensely. Please gift us with another as soon as you can. xo

Don’t like the dying part. At times I felt it was hard to read, but then it got smoother and better. Sad it ended the way it did

First AH twi fic that I've ever read. Mainly because I already enjoyed some of your writing, not then there also was the review starting this was better than some of the books that person had been reading ;)
Anyways thanks for writing it. I'm more of an eat the rich kinda one, and I did wonder why all anyone ever did was drink or work (well, and occasionally shag) - but I stuck with it. You're good at writing! This b makes sense as a character.

Thanks for sharing your ideas with us!

i know this fic is more than a few years old and I’m surprised I never read it before now, but on the off chance you are still reading your reviews, you should know I LOVED this story. It’s so smart and interesting. I loved the dialog, and the intelligence and business savvy of this Bella. Have you considered a small rewrite and submitting for publishing? It is so much better than many books I’ve read lately.

Love this Bella already.

What a lame ass ending.

Reading for the second time, still some of the best dialogue in fan fiction

2nd time Iv read this, just as good if not better than the first.
Thanks for sharing