|Reviews for Dissonance|
| Jane chapter 41 . 9/8
Lovely, lovely. A change from blowing shit up, but I loved it just the same. I hope I can find a few more of your great stories to read…
| Jane chapter 5 . 9/7
Ok, I’ve been steadily working through all your wonderful stories since I discovered them a couple of weeks ago. I just loved Rose’s bachelorette party speech. As usual fascinating original plot, great characters, great dialogue, and no idea where you are going to take this story, but I know I’ll love it.
| Mimram chapter 41 . 7/30
great story, you definitely have a way of writing humor, loved every moment until Chapter 41 where I felt like I hit a brick wall going 80 mph. Your characters were recognizable as Twilight characters but way more fun, still laughing about a couple of scenes. Thanks for writing this.
| Kksmum chapter 40 . 2/7
I love this story. I think this is the third reading tho it may be four.
I love the humour, the funny remarks at the end of each part.
I always love a strong, clever successful Bella. I’ll take Edward anyway!
Thanks for a great read with so many good laughs.
| JulizaRose chapter 42 . 7/8/2021
I’m sorry I’m horrible with reviewing. I love your stories, I love this story, I enjoy your writing immensely. Please gift us with another as soon as you can. xo
| Elle Whitecap chapter 41 . 5/27/2021
Don’t like the dying part. At times I felt it was hard to read, but then it got smoother and better. Sad it ended the way it did
| Lemonmelons chapter 41 . 1/7/2021
First AH twi fic that I've ever read. Mainly because I already enjoyed some of your writing, not then there also was the review starting this was better than some of the books that person had been reading ;)
Anyways thanks for writing it. I'm more of an eat the rich kinda one, and I did wonder why all anyone ever did was drink or work (well, and occasionally shag) - but I stuck with it. You're good at writing! This b makes sense as a character.
Thanks for sharing your ideas with us!
| lurker123 chapter 42 . 10/11/2020
i know this fic is more than a few years old and I’m surprised I never read it before now, but on the off chance you are still reading your reviews, you should know I LOVED this story. It’s so smart and interesting. I loved the dialog, and the intelligence and business savvy of this Bella. Have you considered a small rewrite and submitting for publishing? It is so much better than many books I’ve read lately.
| fla.polo chapter 1 . 9/21/2020
Love this Bella already.
| chellekathrynnn chapter 41 . 7/25/2020
What a lame ass ending.
| Secretrevenge chapter 41 . 5/30/2020
Reading for the second time, still some of the best dialogue in fan fiction
| Kaltan chapter 42 . 5/16/2020
2nd time Iv read this, just as good if not better than the first.
Thanks for sharing
| Gemm13 chapter 36 . 5/6/2020
Awww our poor emotionally-stunted sweethearts
| Gemm13 chapter 8 . 5/6/2020
Captains of the E/B ship (aka all the cullens) unite hehe
| Gemm13 chapter 5 . 5/6/2020
Rose is a riot! I love the personalities of all the characters