Reviews for Dissonance
Twiolic chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Nice car. I'd never heard of it. Looks like a good family car. Do you have one? ;o)

She fell into her position at Cask quite nicely. But, does she still want it? That little act of violence may have triggered something more than tears. She needs some Edward time.

Demetri is a saint! I hope she keeps him.
SusanQ chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Right place at the right time. It all makes sense.
And then Poor Bella at the wrong place at the wrong time...
But this:
"There goes the friends and lovers part I guess." LOL
TrulyOutrageous chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Good reading glad Demetri got to her in time.
crazymama chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Nothing like a brush with terror to make you analyze your life... I wonder what she'll end up doing now!
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
I knew I loved Dimitri. Loving the story, thank you.. x
sfspeedy chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Great chapter. Interesting to read that there's another side, a very sad an scary one, to her supposed charmed life. Dimitri rocks!

Thank you!
LLH88 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Great chapter! Perhaps this incident with the stalker will sets things in motion for Bella & Edward? It was sad to read Bella's realization that she is missing/lacking something vital to attract men. I do enjoy the pace of the chapters and the style in which you write. Thank you for sharing.

gracie7236 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
So nice to learn how B became CEO. love Demetri! Can't wait for the next chapter.
TessLouise chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Love Demitri!
Robward17 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Holy crow...thank goodness Demetri was there!
Mgonz595 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Poor Bella, just realizing how alone she is & probably the stocker thing is also making her cry.
GorGirl chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
I'm glad that she had Demetri watching out for her.
sweetncole22 chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
My goodness.
NeedMyFix chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Well, this is different. I like different!
Maplestyle chapter 4 . 10/11/2014
Poor Bella! Can't wait for more.
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