Reviews for Dissonance
staceleo chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
This Bella is great! She flawed and so very original. Love it!
bakergirl24 chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Good afternoon Morty, I hope all is well. God, Bella's life is depressing as hell. So did she have an open relationship with Jake? I'm still not sure if he is gay or not. LOL. He did pull on her robe but hell unless you write the dirty little deed we are still in the dark. My dark tells me he likes really cute boys apparently with British accents. Then again, who doesn't like those?

In my dark little world I am going to assume Bella's mom is in a coma and her dad has Alzheimer's since he called her mother.

This girl needs something big to wake her up. Snap her out of it.

Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.
dixie.do.little chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Busy busy busy, Bella...
I wonder who her lover is?
And what's going on with her parents?
And what does she do?
And what's up with her parents?
And who is her lover?
Maplestyle chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Poor Bella. Her life kind of makes me feel bad for her! Can't wait for more.
sfspeedy chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Loving this Bella.
Genny910 chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Wow. That's really sad. I love it.
beckysue999 chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Bella is definitely ready for a different type of life...
MyLifeAsAWhitlock chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
Isabella the player...that's a new one. Loved it.
dixie.do.little chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
This time I will not be a complete fail at reviewing...this time I will not be a complete fail at reviewing...this time I will not be a complete fail at reviewing...this time I will not be a complete fail at reviewing...If I tell myself this enough times it has to be true, right? Yeah.

Oh...AH? Very interesting direction for you. I like how Bella is written as a successful, driven, independent woman...I like that a lot...

I can't wait to see what you take this!
Robward17 chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
YEAH! I'm ready for this trip!
slc6548 chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Looks good!
bakergirl24 chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Good morning Mortissues, I hope all is well. I pulled this off Iris's fb page and thought I would give it a shot. Interesting start. Some questions which I will reserve for later chapters. One though I have to ask now...Is Jake gay? LOL. He's never around and from Rose's description I don't think Bella is getting any on a regular basis or at all for that matter. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.
flyrbrd chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Thanks!
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Hip hip hooray! I love how these stories just flow out of you, Morty! I'm ready for this next adventure/ride with you. Which includes of course the bumps, the crazy curveballs and the occasional (read: probably constant) lump in my throat with every update.
I am so ready!
Thanks for always entertaining us!
Xoxoxo
Jen
SeptemberGirl 7 chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Sounds interesting...great start.
I like that Bella has a driver and runs the company.
Looking forward to more Edward-Bella time!
Thank you!
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