Reviews for Unlucky Servants
Blindfold Snake chapter 1 . 2/9
*ROLF*

Both Accelerator and Heracles are confused as fate
N2 chapter 6 . 9/23/2018
Continue.
nicetoderp chapter 5 . 10/29/2015
Unlucky Sevant is a cooking fanfic.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
actually Touma's right hand would erase himself if was able to be summoned
polarpwnage chapter 2 . 4/22/2015
Ilya might have unlimited command sigils but she can only use one per day, not spamming it -.- otherwise he'd get infinite power boosts in a single fight
Struggle Is Real chapter 6 . 4/4/2015
since i lack a lot of the fate/stay night universe knowledge this has been quite confusing to read. I was wondering if you could know may be put some notes here and there to more thoroughly explain part people may not understand.
Legends Storyteller chapter 6 . 4/1/2015
Assassin: Unabara Mitsuki/Etzali?

Rider: Silver Cross? Male Rensa? A cyborg in any case.

BTW just finished New Testament Vol.12.
adv chapter 6 . 3/31/2015
lol berserker
FreezingAcidRain chapter 5 . 3/10/2015
ZidanReign review nails it (I too hoping for a serious, setting more so in Fuyuki City, but hey I don't want my review changing it cause I want to see where this goes), but I still enjoyed this chapter. This roller coaster has its ups and downs. This chapter makes me what to read more.
ZidanReign chapter 5 . 2/15/2015
What is this story even.

Everything is all over the place.

All of the world building from both verses is thrown out of the window along with logic.

Unbelievable character interactions.

I was willing to look past the discrepancies in the earlier chapters because oooh Shirou and Index? I'm curious. But now?

This chapter was a mess. I thought I was looking at a serious story.

I guess not.
D3vilNeverCry chapter 5 . 2/15/2015
The moment Illya use the command seal to make Accel her husband, I keep waiting for him to at least hum "singing in the rain", if Kokutou can do it, then why not Accel? But alas It didn't come, such a waste opportunity in my opinion.
Legends Storyteller chapter 5 . 2/14/2015
I laughed my ass in this chapter!
For the restaurant's name, it's "Le Rêve", and not "La Rêve".
pandawa chapter 5 . 2/14/2015
Whoa Caster vs Touma? Somebody Illusion gonna be destroyed.
D3vilNeverCry chapter 4 . 1/17/2015
Zombie desu ka reference? Should have made Hamaura a magical girl then.
The Accelerator chapter 4 . 1/14/2015
Is that a Tokyo Ghoul reference I see there. Nice.
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