Reviews for I Dare You To Strip For Him
SouthParkKyman chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
That was an awesome sequel
vaudevillediva101 chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Oh how i love a good Kyman fanfiction, great job (love the german put into it, fav second language)
LovelyLuly chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Yey they are finally that together: the end of the other story was very open,but this one is cool
TEP Redux chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
I like the stripping scene quite a lot, actually! I think it is the strongest component of the story, in fact.

For me, the weak spot is some of the dialogue in the first half of the story (before they're drunk). I've reread that section twice now, and it took me a while to put my finger on what I think my problem with the dialogue is: there's just a bit much of it, and sometimes it feels like it goes on a bit long without substantive narrative or exposition to break it up. Partly I think that's a stylistic preference on my part, but I also think that in general you are more adept at revealing things through voiceover and exposition, while your dialogue is more uneven (for example, some of the Jew/Fatass/Poor Kid banter feels a bit canned in this context, for some reason), though there are certainly moments when the dialogue is strong here.
SoulMore chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
DarlingDecay chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
I love it! I'm glad you decided to write a sequel to I Dare You To Kiss Him because it's really nice to see them actually get together. Also, love the choice of music!
I would really like to see more Kyman goodness from you!
Cass.cherryy chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
*Dies of laughter*
This is different, but I do like it. Never have I seen, or should I say, read, Kyle do that before. This is awesome!
MB83 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
You don't know how much I've waited for a fanfic with Kyle giving Cartman a lap dance. I don't know, you're my religion now.
symphknot chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Awwww i really loved it!
Cster chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
I found this incredibly perfect. 10/10 will read again. I haven't read the first one, but now on to do that. I think it was the perfect combination of steamy, in character, and funny. The German words made it even better.