Interesting character study. I don't really know what else to say. It's good.

Oh gosh, the undercurrent of grimness weaving through the heist is breathtakingly good,

I freaking ADORED this! There is sadly a distinct lack of Nakamori-keibu-and-KID-interaction stories out there, nevermind actual GOOD ones! I really, really enjoyed and appreciated this! Your attention to detail is superb, and the take you have on Nakamori-keibu is refreshing and purely wonderful! Outstanding job! Eleven-out-of-ten! LOVED IT!

Keep up the good work~!

This was really good. I like fics showing the more intelligent side of the often outsmarted polices/detectives.

That was the best sentence ever. "And for the first time in his life, Nakamori makes contact."

This was INCREDIBLE.

Aww... poor Nakamori~ And when he finnaly managed to get a grip on KID XD

This is an excellent story! Great characterisation and a great heist fic.

Wow

This is possibly one of the best heist-fics I have ever read. Also I love your Nakamori. The descriptions were great, I loved the details-especially Himura who used to be on the bomb squad-and it just makes so much sense, all of it. I think I might have to read all your DC/MK fic and that's a problem because I have other things I should be doing right now. That said, seriously, lovely job.

loved it! I like stories where Nakamori is given isn't dismissed as a hopeless fool.

This is by far the greatest character study I've read, keep up the good work

Sequel? :)

Wow, this story gave me chills. Nakamori really is smarter than a lot of people give him credit for. And damn, he managed to pin Kid down? I liked the way that he put the lives of officers before capturing Kid. It's something that I could totally see him doing. Gosho should seriously do something like this!

Could you please make a sequel? Please? This has so much potential! So much can happen, like Nakamori actually cornering Kid, or Nakamori actually researching about the snipers, or (gawd) Nakamori actually WORKING with Kid? It could be like a Kid and Nakamori-centric story, because the two have this very entertaining father-in-law – son-in-law relationship.

Just a bunch of suggestions. But I hope you can make a sequel! I enjoyed this a lot!

Nice.