Keep it up :)

Awesome to see this updated and what a great chapter it was. I'm looking forward to seeing how the next one will play out and I get the feeling we'll eventually learn what it was that the Ori were looking for and possibly found on Delmak.

Until the next one.

YES ITS ALIVE!

Hoorah lets finish the fight

A great story here so far! I'm looking forward to reading more!

Thank you for this, even though its your idea on how the series ends it still gives me a sense of closure. This fanfic is truly somthing.

Great update, looking forward to more. Thanks!

Looking forward to reading more of your story!

6k is not that long of a chapter...
Then again, I prefer long chapters.
You have improved. I am a bit disappointed there is not more to read yet.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good story so far, looking forward to read more.

Excellent chapter!

Well, as it turns out, after reviewing my "Review History" (XD), not only did I use to review for "A Change of Fate", but I used to do so more often than I remembered. I honestly don't know why I didn't keep reviewing after "ACoF" ended and "H:TOW" began. And again, I do apologize for that.

Ever since you uploaded the first chapter of the sequel, I've felt an insane amount of excitement reading it. Several scenes have made me smile widely, like all the Jack scenes and the rightful return of the Nox.

But this chapter? This chapter right here gave me oh such HEEEEE-UGE chills!

The Jaffa perspective of the groundside fight nearly made me cry of joy. (And don't think I didn't see what you did there, reversing the roles of the Sangheili and the Spartans for such perspective. ) During the Humenant-Covenant war, such a scene would've been horrifying to humans. Obiously. But these are, in a way, different Sangheili. Not ones fighting out of religious zeal but for true honor and freedom.

Come to think of it, NOW I'm crying.

You can be sure I'll be expecting the next chapter eagerly-and a nice review from here on out for each new one. Thanks for coming back!

First of all, I want to apologize if I've never left a review for either this story or "A Change of Fateand I say "if" bc, for the life of me, I cannot remember if I did, but I have a vague notion that I must've left one review at the very least in either one).

This fanfic series is one of the best I've read. Ever. Of all time. It deserves all the love it can get, and I'm sorry I for one haven't given it more recognition. I did wonder what had become of you, and it's good to know your still around and working on completing this story.

Needless to say, I, as a fanfiction writer, know what it is like having to juggle with lack of inspiration/writer's block on top of everything else. So, no need to apologize. Just do your best at your own pace. Quality stuff is better than something regards from a long-time fan! And welcome back!

This was beautiful

Nice to see you're back, excellent battle scene here, on another note, please please please let Jack keep the Enterprise. He deserves to finally get to keep his hijacked ship lol.