|Reviews for Narration Irritation 3: Lemon Bones|
| BillBrink chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
If Monty Python had a writer like you they would still be on the air today.
| jon reeve chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
“... she began to feel his Nimbus company stock rising in value.”
/This line is gold.
“Harry's eyes closed in bliss, feeling like a kid at a candy store - but instead of a kid, he was 16, and instead of candy, there was sex.”
| ProditorMagnus chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I should save this for all the vocabulary.
| Real-OblivionEclipse chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
| Star.Gone.Cold chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
At the guest:
It's his or her own writing. If you don't like it go write your own book.
| Dcreature chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
Interesting choice of words. Thanks for sharing.
| ThousandMastery chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
I love you so much, you genius.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
Too many weird similes, unnecessary. This is perfectly good writing without them
| butterleaf chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
You didn't read that book of random facts that I can't remember the name of by any chance, did you? That one with the section of 'Things Written by Pupils in English Exams?'
| Lord Crane chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
I don't normally comment, but I just wanted to congratulate you one writing a chapter that had me laughing nearly nonstop from beginning to end. Those horrible similes were wonderful.
| Ferm chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
it was in deep throat sounds like the one at dog makes just before it throws up..
| MKTerra chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
This is terrible. In a well written way. I love seeing fics that are purposely written like this. lol.
| Lord Darkly chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Genius. Just pure genius. Poor Harry, having to deal with such a poor narration in so many fics...
Here's hoping that random bashing doesn't plague his world too.
Looking forward to the sequel-sequel.
| amortentiate chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
The "narration" series are some of the funniest stories I've ever read. Please keep them coming.
| Kevin3 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
For disclosure's sake, I only made up about a third of these (awful) puns. Most were found by some googling. Just didn't want anyone to think everything was mine and then burst in with a "This isn't your work!" review.