Reviews for Loyalty
Kelly185891 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
I'm glad Harry didn't just stay a summons it makes the story more interesting with human to human interaction. Anyway love the story so far and will favorite it, update soon!
shenmi meiren chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
3
Gelasia Kidd chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
;o; this made me equally sad and hopeful
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Love it. Please continue?
Addict to Fanfics chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
So... wow. Really liked it. Great work.
loretta537 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
more please
Old Girl Lost chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
This was so sweet I was practically crying over it at the end. (Was Harry de-aged a bit by the universe shift? They were being extremely careful of him by the end.)

How old is Naruto at this time?

All sorts of questions that another few dozen chapters would answer but it stands alone quite nicely.

Thank you
Red Crow chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
i loved it, it was wonderful and i wished that you would mae a full chaptered fic out of it.
Belle'Masque chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
Love it :D! Sequel?

Belle 3
alamodie chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
Like. Likelikelikelikelike.

Honestly, this is fantastic, so very introspective and somber, but some of what you said about Harry really made me reconsider the character.
Pink the Legendary chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
I am going to STALK this fic, sweet Mother Mary, this is GORGEOUS, I am in love so HARD...
gojyo-lover20 chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
I loved this. It would be great if you continued.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Fantastic idea that, um, ended up kind of useless. Seriously, incredible start but then lost its way.
Nataly S. Potter chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Great plot! Very interesting! :D
If you write more i will definitely read!
Please write more! please please please!
SilverWritesThings chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Lost, Empty, Hollow and Alone and the fault is my own...
Do you listen to Linkin Park?
(Good Band...)
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